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Reviewer: Juliancolton ( talk · contribs) 15:47, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
Hi, I'll be reviewing this article's GA nomination. I'll post comments as I read.
Unfortunately, I get the impression that this article would be better suited for a complete rewrite than a GA nomination. Presently it fails multiple GA criterion, including depth of coverage, verifiability, clarity of prose, and proper structure. I haven't made it beyond the first few paragraphs, but it is clear to me that the article requires far more improvements than I'm able to suggest here. Sorry. – Juliancolton | Talk 15:47, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Juliancolton ( talk · contribs) 15:47, 9 October 2014 (UTC)
Hi, I'll be reviewing this article's GA nomination. I'll post comments as I read.
Unfortunately, I get the impression that this article would be better suited for a complete rewrite than a GA nomination. Presently it fails multiple GA criterion, including depth of coverage, verifiability, clarity of prose, and proper structure. I haven't made it beyond the first few paragraphs, but it is clear to me that the article requires far more improvements than I'm able to suggest here. Sorry. – Juliancolton | Talk 15:47, 9 October 2014 (UTC)