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The Court Document, Whitefriars Newsletter, and Funeral Notice all provide different date of Cronin's death. I have decided it stick with the Court Document's date. If anyone else has a better idea of actual date feel free to implement it (with the appropriate citation of course). - GA Melbourne ( talk) 02:06, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
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I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:44, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
I'll start with a source review and spotchecks. Footnote numbers refer to this version.
I'm going to fail this because of the spotcheck; I recommend going through and checking each cited sentence for close paraphrasing before renominating. One other comment from a read-through is that there are lots of very short paragraphs, which makes for a choppy reading experience. The "Andrew William Lee" section, for example, is rather WP:PROSELINE, and I think some copyediting is needed there. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 16:49, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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The Court Document, Whitefriars Newsletter, and Funeral Notice all provide different date of Cronin's death. I have decided it stick with the Court Document's date. If anyone else has a better idea of actual date feel free to implement it (with the appropriate citation of course). - GA Melbourne ( talk) 02:06, 18 January 2023 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by
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22:43, 8 March 2023 (UTC)
Created by GA Melbourne ( talk). Self-nominated at 14:10, 18 January 2023 (UTC).
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Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 13:44, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 13:44, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
I'll start with a source review and spotchecks. Footnote numbers refer to this version.
I'm going to fail this because of the spotcheck; I recommend going through and checking each cited sentence for close paraphrasing before renominating. One other comment from a read-through is that there are lots of very short paragraphs, which makes for a choppy reading experience. The "Andrew William Lee" section, for example, is rather WP:PROSELINE, and I think some copyediting is needed there. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 16:49, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. |
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3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. |
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6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. |
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7. Overall assessment. |