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Reviewer: Khazar2 ( talk · contribs) 23:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
I can take this one. Thanks in advance to everybody who's worked on it! Comments to follow shortly. -- Khazar2 ( talk) 23:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
First, let me apologize that you've had to wait so long for a review; the backlog's really been terrible at GAN lately.
This article seems like it's off to a good start in many respects; the description of the characters is particularly well-fleshed out, and some parts are well-sourced. Other areas seem to need work, however, and it appears to me overall that this will need substantial expansion and rewriting to become a GA. You may want to look at a sample series GA like Arrested Development (TV series) or 24 (TV series) to get a sense of what's usually included.
Some specific suggestions:
Since there's significant work to be done here, I'm going to close this one and not list it for GA at this time. I hope you'll consider renominating once you've addressed the above points, however--this sounds like an interesting show, and I'd love to see it get to GA. I'll do what I can to make sure it doesn't have so long a wait next time (either reviewing myself, or recruiting someone else to do so).
Thanks again for all your work, and best of luck with this one in the future! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 23:40, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
Also, shouldn't Harry the Lizard be named as a recurring character? -- 82.14.248.55 ( talk) 21:27, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
Corrected San Francisco Station: airs on KQED, not KQEH... 73.170.171.202 ( talk) 23:17, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Khazar2 ( talk · contribs) 23:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
I can take this one. Thanks in advance to everybody who's worked on it! Comments to follow shortly. -- Khazar2 ( talk) 23:14, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
First, let me apologize that you've had to wait so long for a review; the backlog's really been terrible at GAN lately.
This article seems like it's off to a good start in many respects; the description of the characters is particularly well-fleshed out, and some parts are well-sourced. Other areas seem to need work, however, and it appears to me overall that this will need substantial expansion and rewriting to become a GA. You may want to look at a sample series GA like Arrested Development (TV series) or 24 (TV series) to get a sense of what's usually included.
Some specific suggestions:
Since there's significant work to be done here, I'm going to close this one and not list it for GA at this time. I hope you'll consider renominating once you've addressed the above points, however--this sounds like an interesting show, and I'd love to see it get to GA. I'll do what I can to make sure it doesn't have so long a wait next time (either reviewing myself, or recruiting someone else to do so).
Thanks again for all your work, and best of luck with this one in the future! -- Khazar2 ( talk) 23:40, 18 October 2013 (UTC)
Also, shouldn't Harry the Lizard be named as a recurring character? -- 82.14.248.55 ( talk) 21:27, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
Corrected San Francisco Station: airs on KQED, not KQEH... 73.170.171.202 ( talk) 23:17, 22 October 2014 (UTC)