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Reviewer: Bluesphere ( talk · contribs) 07:34, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
Greetings, I will give this one a review. This might take me a few days so bear with me.
Blue
sphere
07:34, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
Lead
Done
Done
Plot
Done
Not done Please illustrate an example.
Done
Done
Cast
Not done You still haven't sourced the other names.
Blue
sphere
13:23, 17 July 2017 (UTC)
Development and casting
Done
Done, except for "If so, then what factors influenced her decision to hire them again in her next film?" because there is no source about it.
Filming and post-production
Not done Already linked in lead.
Critical reception
Done for "Just remove the reviews from Rediff.com, Wion Tv and NDTV; print reviews are more encouraged."
but
Not done for "This section borders in
WP:QUOTEFARM, so convert some of the quotations here into prose. The positive reviews of the India section could also use a trimming." Please illustrate an example how to covert quotations into prose.
Done
And that's it. I'll put this one on hold as you fix these concerns I raised. In case you have questions, you don't need to ping me; I have put this review page into my watchlist. Good luck. Blue sphere 14:20, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
All names in the "Cast" section are listed in the fourth source. Open the link and check out the names. So all names in the "Cast" section are sourced. And as for the names of the actors added in the "Plot" section, please see good articles at Portal:Bollywood. Scroll down the page and check out the good articles. All GA articles have actors names in the "Plot" section. Mr. Smart LION 15:17, 18 July 2017 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Bluesphere ( talk · contribs) 07:34, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
Greetings, I will give this one a review. This might take me a few days so bear with me.
Blue
sphere
07:34, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
Lead
Done
Done
Plot
Done
Not done Please illustrate an example.
Done
Done
Cast
Not done You still haven't sourced the other names.
Blue
sphere
13:23, 17 July 2017 (UTC)
Development and casting
Done
Done, except for "If so, then what factors influenced her decision to hire them again in her next film?" because there is no source about it.
Filming and post-production
Not done Already linked in lead.
Critical reception
Done for "Just remove the reviews from Rediff.com, Wion Tv and NDTV; print reviews are more encouraged."
but
Not done for "This section borders in
WP:QUOTEFARM, so convert some of the quotations here into prose. The positive reviews of the India section could also use a trimming." Please illustrate an example how to covert quotations into prose.
Done
And that's it. I'll put this one on hold as you fix these concerns I raised. In case you have questions, you don't need to ping me; I have put this review page into my watchlist. Good luck. Blue sphere 14:20, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
All names in the "Cast" section are listed in the fourth source. Open the link and check out the names. So all names in the "Cast" section are sourced. And as for the names of the actors added in the "Plot" section, please see good articles at Portal:Bollywood. Scroll down the page and check out the good articles. All GA articles have actors names in the "Plot" section. Mr. Smart LION 15:17, 18 July 2017 (UTC)