Released on October 3, 1995 by Columbia Records, the album leaned towards hip hop and Contemporary R&B compared to her previous albums There should be a "the" before hip hop and and add "genres" after R&B.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
in her next release, Butterfly (1997) change to "in her 1997 release, Butterfly."
There were disagreements during production with Columbia about the album's style, disputes that were reflected in her marriage at the time to Tommy Mottola, head of her music label. this sentence needs cleaning-up.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The album saw Carey grow and find herself as an artist This reads weird, since an album "seeing" really isn't the best wording here.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The blockquote in "Background" is only three sentences, and therefore is below the number of sentences where blockquotes are required per
MOS:QUOTE. Just opinion wise, I don't think it should have its own block. But I guess it's fine.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
Soon, it was obvious that their marriage was in trouble, as stated in a Vanity Fair article, "the couple began to argue at the drop of a hat." Where does it say that it was obvious in the reference? "was in trouble" seems to be poor English and needs to be reworded.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The song was as "strong as any slow jam released in the nineties, and one that would find a lot of flavor late at night with dancers." State the quote's author.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
"Fantasy", writing "The bumping since writing is used three other times in the section, "writing" should be replaced with "noted that".
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The main article of Promotion is said to be "Daydream World Tour", perhaps this should be changed to {{Template:Details}} since it isn't all about that article.
CrowzRSA00:33, 18 November 2010 (UTC)reply
Still Doin...
Non-reviewer comment - The captions of the audio samples need to be addressed as the samples are in the recording and composition section, yet they are talking about charting. Candyo3209:04, 6 November 2010 (UTC)reply
Released on October 3, 1995 by Columbia Records, the album leaned towards hip hop and Contemporary R&B compared to her previous albums There should be a "the" before hip hop and and add "genres" after R&B.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
in her next release, Butterfly (1997) change to "in her 1997 release, Butterfly."
There were disagreements during production with Columbia about the album's style, disputes that were reflected in her marriage at the time to Tommy Mottola, head of her music label. this sentence needs cleaning-up.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The album saw Carey grow and find herself as an artist This reads weird, since an album "seeing" really isn't the best wording here.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The blockquote in "Background" is only three sentences, and therefore is below the number of sentences where blockquotes are required per
MOS:QUOTE. Just opinion wise, I don't think it should have its own block. But I guess it's fine.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
Soon, it was obvious that their marriage was in trouble, as stated in a Vanity Fair article, "the couple began to argue at the drop of a hat." Where does it say that it was obvious in the reference? "was in trouble" seems to be poor English and needs to be reworded.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The song was as "strong as any slow jam released in the nineties, and one that would find a lot of flavor late at night with dancers." State the quote's author.
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
"Fantasy", writing "The bumping since writing is used three other times in the section, "writing" should be replaced with "noted that".
CrowzRSA01:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC)reply
The main article of Promotion is said to be "Daydream World Tour", perhaps this should be changed to {{Template:Details}} since it isn't all about that article.
CrowzRSA00:33, 18 November 2010 (UTC)reply
Still Doin...
Non-reviewer comment - The captions of the audio samples need to be addressed as the samples are in the recording and composition section, yet they are talking about charting. Candyo3209:04, 6 November 2010 (UTC)reply