Expand GM out to general manager, you haven't mentioned what the abbreviation meant. Done
Be consistent with the use of ellipses.
"runner up" Dash needed. Done
"2011–12 camapgin" Done
"although the following season would be his last. In his final season with the team, Perron failed to maintain his scoring prowess" A bit of editorializing and puffery, especially with the source only showing stats. Done
Misspelling for Ref 33's title (30 Thoughts). Done
"During the preseason games, Perron recorded three goals and four points in three exhibition games." Maybe change it to "Through three preseason games, Perron recorded three goals and four points." Done
"Penguins lone goal" Missing apostrophe. Done
"Perro said" Done
Starting to realize that there's a lot of quotes in the article...
Expand GM out to general manager, you haven't mentioned what the abbreviation meant. Done
Be consistent with the use of ellipses.
"runner up" Dash needed. Done
"2011–12 camapgin" Done
"although the following season would be his last. In his final season with the team, Perron failed to maintain his scoring prowess" A bit of editorializing and puffery, especially with the source only showing stats. Done
Misspelling for Ref 33's title (30 Thoughts). Done
"During the preseason games, Perron recorded three goals and four points in three exhibition games." Maybe change it to "Through three preseason games, Perron recorded three goals and four points." Done
"Penguins lone goal" Missing apostrophe. Done
"Perro said" Done
Starting to realize that there's a lot of quotes in the article...