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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 00:07, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
I will take this one, comments to follow over the next couple of days.
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- Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maltasj ( talk • contribs) 12:50, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
Initial comments
Having had a brief look at this, it is some way off GA standard. Some issues:
Although there are a few other minor issues I could point out, and others that I have probably missed on this pass, it probably isn't worthwhile discussing them given the extent of the likely changes that will come out of rectifying the issues mentioned above. Given the amount of work required, it may take you several days. If so, it may be better for me to fail this article so you can carry out the work at your leisure. Once done, you can then renominate it for GA. One final thing, despite the name of the subject of this article, I assume the Malt in your username is just a coincidence. If not, you should review Wikipedia:Conflict of interest. Cheers, Zawed ( talk) 07:51, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
Thank you, will fix these. Feel free to fail the article as it might indeed take some time. Maltasj ( talk) 07:42, 12 April 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 00:07, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
I will take this one, comments to follow over the next couple of days.
Zawed (
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00:07, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maltasj ( talk • contribs) 12:50, 9 April 2018 (UTC)
Initial comments
Having had a brief look at this, it is some way off GA standard. Some issues:
Although there are a few other minor issues I could point out, and others that I have probably missed on this pass, it probably isn't worthwhile discussing them given the extent of the likely changes that will come out of rectifying the issues mentioned above. Given the amount of work required, it may take you several days. If so, it may be better for me to fail this article so you can carry out the work at your leisure. Once done, you can then renominate it for GA. One final thing, despite the name of the subject of this article, I assume the Malt in your username is just a coincidence. If not, you should review Wikipedia:Conflict of interest. Cheers, Zawed ( talk) 07:51, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
Thank you, will fix these. Feel free to fail the article as it might indeed take some time. Maltasj ( talk) 07:42, 12 April 2018 (UTC)