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" his father rose " we've lost track of whose father now.
I've rephrased a bit so that pronouns in the paragraph should be clearer. It's hard keeping grammatical track of multiple people with the same name.
Ergo Sum03:03, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
I think our readers know what "theater" is without needing to link it.
My general rule is that even if a concept is well-known, if it forms the prominent subject of a paragraph, it should be linked. Otherwise, major concepts would never be linked on wiki except in lists and other non-primary content.
Ergo Sum03:06, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
" in college football" I would call it college football first time round.
The first time it's mentioned, it's very clear that it's a college football program. The subsequent time would give the impression of all football without specifying that it's college football that is concerned.
Ergo Sum03:09, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
" of a new Ryan Gymnasium" is this a thing? Or is it just called that named for someone called Ryan? And you say a "new Ryan Gym", was there an existing or old Ryan Gym?
"e university of a student who left to act" I think if his expulsion came as a result of him leaving for the baptism, this would read better as "e university of a student who had left to act".
Since nun is often used sloppily to refer to a number of related but different things, I've linked it her so that a reader knows it is actually a nun that is meant.
Ergo Sum03:13, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
"in Point Allterton, Massachusetts in " comma after Massachusetts.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
" his father rose " we've lost track of whose father now.
I've rephrased a bit so that pronouns in the paragraph should be clearer. It's hard keeping grammatical track of multiple people with the same name.
Ergo Sum03:03, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
I think our readers know what "theater" is without needing to link it.
My general rule is that even if a concept is well-known, if it forms the prominent subject of a paragraph, it should be linked. Otherwise, major concepts would never be linked on wiki except in lists and other non-primary content.
Ergo Sum03:06, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
" in college football" I would call it college football first time round.
The first time it's mentioned, it's very clear that it's a college football program. The subsequent time would give the impression of all football without specifying that it's college football that is concerned.
Ergo Sum03:09, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
" of a new Ryan Gymnasium" is this a thing? Or is it just called that named for someone called Ryan? And you say a "new Ryan Gym", was there an existing or old Ryan Gym?
"e university of a student who left to act" I think if his expulsion came as a result of him leaving for the baptism, this would read better as "e university of a student who had left to act".
Since nun is often used sloppily to refer to a number of related but different things, I've linked it her so that a reader knows it is actually a nun that is meant.
Ergo Sum03:13, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
"in Point Allterton, Massachusetts in " comma after Massachusetts.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.