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Reviewer: Sportsguy17 ( talk · contribs) 21:26, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
And we meet again Major League Baseball buddy. I'm glad to review this article. I am a WikiCup participant, but this in no way will affect the review. I do have classes this week, so this review may take up to a week. Thanks. Sportsguy17 ( T • C) 21:26, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
As I said earlier, this article is looking good. Most of the involved changes will be a matter of proper sentences and organizations of sections. So, let me start off:
These are my initial thoughts and I'll let you make the changes as such. I don't see a lot of issues with the rest of the article, but I'll take a look tomorrow. Sportsguy17 ( T • C) 00:28, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
Here is my section-by-section:
Just address the Early life and career concerns and then this article should be passing. Sportsguy17 ( T • C) 03:43, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
Danny Shay has been listed as one of the
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A fact from Danny Shay appeared on Wikipedia's
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Sportsguy17 ( talk · contribs) 21:26, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
And we meet again Major League Baseball buddy. I'm glad to review this article. I am a WikiCup participant, but this in no way will affect the review. I do have classes this week, so this review may take up to a week. Thanks. Sportsguy17 ( T • C) 21:26, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
As I said earlier, this article is looking good. Most of the involved changes will be a matter of proper sentences and organizations of sections. So, let me start off:
These are my initial thoughts and I'll let you make the changes as such. I don't see a lot of issues with the rest of the article, but I'll take a look tomorrow. Sportsguy17 ( T • C) 00:28, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
Here is my section-by-section:
Just address the Early life and career concerns and then this article should be passing. Sportsguy17 ( T • C) 03:43, 24 February 2014 (UTC)