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Reviewer: MJL ( talk · contribs) 02:05, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
It's almost there, but it's not quite there yet. It's a death by a thousand cuts kind of situation. It's a decent article, but a lot of little things weigh it down.
|publisher=
when they mean to use |work=
or leaving - Gematsuin
|title=
), they aren't the only ones with issues.@ Lee Vilenski: I tried adding more creation about the game involving the handling of the two protagonists and an image if it helps to illustrate such twist. Siliconera has commentary about Kodaka discussing the "reality tv twist" if it helps. Feel free to revise anything. Tintor2 ( talk) 23:09, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
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Lee Vilenski: I suppose the same issues I have now are the same issues I had earlier. The italics are still inconsistent to a fault. Things like Magazines and video games (even in prose) should always be italicised. However, mini-games and game modes should not be italicized per
MOS:NOITALIC Hangman's Gambit 3.0
vs Death Road of Despair
. Once that is all fixed, I'll take another look to see if I missed anything more significant. –
MJL
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Reviewer: MJL ( talk · contribs) 02:05, 16 October 2021 (UTC)
It's almost there, but it's not quite there yet. It's a death by a thousand cuts kind of situation. It's a decent article, but a lot of little things weigh it down.
|publisher=
when they mean to use |work=
or leaving - Gematsuin
|title=
), they aren't the only ones with issues.@ Lee Vilenski: I tried adding more creation about the game involving the handling of the two protagonists and an image if it helps to illustrate such twist. Siliconera has commentary about Kodaka discussing the "reality tv twist" if it helps. Feel free to revise anything. Tintor2 ( talk) 23:09, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
@
Lee Vilenski: I suppose the same issues I have now are the same issues I had earlier. The italics are still inconsistent to a fault. Things like Magazines and video games (even in prose) should always be italicised. However, mini-games and game modes should not be italicized per
MOS:NOITALIC Hangman's Gambit 3.0
vs Death Road of Despair
. Once that is all fixed, I'll take another look to see if I missed anything more significant. –
MJL
‐Talk‐
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02:46, 29 October 2021 (UTC)