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The writing style in this article is atrocious and not at all what is expected in an encyclopaedia. From the first sentence: "It’s a beautiful NYC night and we see three motorcyclists racing down Manhattan’s FDR drive". It's = It is. Who are "we"? drive =Drive. And then it all goes downhill. Rewrite needed please. Emeraude ( talk) 09:37, 10 April 2008 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

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The writing style in this article is atrocious and not at all what is expected in an encyclopaedia. From the first sentence: "It’s a beautiful NYC night and we see three motorcyclists racing down Manhattan’s FDR drive". It's = It is. Who are "we"? drive =Drive. And then it all goes downhill. Rewrite needed please. Emeraude ( talk) 09:37, 10 April 2008 (UTC) reply


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