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Reviewer: RonaldDuncan ( talk · contribs) 16:03, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
My first impression is that the article is a little light/too short, and that a diagram would be a big help in getting over the concept. It would be good to provide some more references whilst expanding the article. e.g the RFC is 18 pages long and has a list of references.
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if media with acceptable copyright status is appropriate and readily available, which it is not (copyright issues, and most graphics are very poor quality). I'm happy to look into creating something myself, but that should not stop this review progressing (no worries at all if you are just taking your time). I've fixed the lead a little. TheDragonFire ( talk) 17:07, 6 June 2018 (UTC)
@ TheDragonFire: Hi I have done a full review against the criteria, I still think that the issue that we have both raised of the shortness of the article is an issue. Your thoughts are welcome RonaldDuncan ( talk) 14:30, 7 June 2018 (UTC)
OK I had a look at Wikipedia:Article_size and since it is over 1K (10k), I think it is OK to pass as a good article. Interested in any other editors opinions, otherwise I will pass as a good article tomorrow. RonaldDuncan ( talk) 16:16, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | Some of best examples are from connected commercial organisations (CAAs) |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | only potential issue is the examples which have been changed from the source |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | May be too brief |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | No Images! |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | No Images! |
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7. Overall assessment. | Thanks |
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Reviewer: RonaldDuncan ( talk · contribs) 16:03, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
My first impression is that the article is a little light/too short, and that a diagram would be a big help in getting over the concept. It would be good to provide some more references whilst expanding the article. e.g the RFC is 18 pages long and has a list of references.
RonaldDuncan (
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16:03, 5 June 2018 (UTC)
if media with acceptable copyright status is appropriate and readily available, which it is not (copyright issues, and most graphics are very poor quality). I'm happy to look into creating something myself, but that should not stop this review progressing (no worries at all if you are just taking your time). I've fixed the lead a little. TheDragonFire ( talk) 17:07, 6 June 2018 (UTC)
@ TheDragonFire: Hi I have done a full review against the criteria, I still think that the issue that we have both raised of the shortness of the article is an issue. Your thoughts are welcome RonaldDuncan ( talk) 14:30, 7 June 2018 (UTC)
OK I had a look at Wikipedia:Article_size and since it is over 1K (10k), I think it is OK to pass as a good article. Interested in any other editors opinions, otherwise I will pass as a good article tomorrow. RonaldDuncan ( talk) 16:16, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | Some of best examples are from connected commercial organisations (CAAs) |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | only potential issue is the examples which have been changed from the source |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | May be too brief |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | No Images! |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | No Images! |
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7. Overall assessment. | Thanks |