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Reviewer: Schrodinger's cat is alive ( talk · contribs) 10:59, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll make a start on this in a day or so. Should be fun to review some of your stuff! - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 10:59, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
Generally a pretty sound article with no issues. I've undertaken a couple of minor copyedits. I've tried to curb my natural Britishness on spelling, grammar and punctuation, but if I suggest you do something that is wrong or awkward in Americanese, please let me know: similarly, if my copy edits have made a mess of USEng then please feel free to revert.
Only a few point to pick up on overall: nice work and if you can sort the above out in a week then it's a GA for you. Cheers - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 07:48, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
<ref name="DVDnotes">{{cite DVD-notes |title=The X-Files: The Complete Thirds Season |titlelink=The X-Files (season 3) |titleyear=1995–1996 |director=[[Chris Carter (screenwriter)|Chris Carter]], [[Howard Gordon]], et al |format=booklet |publisher=[[Fox Broadcasting Corporation|Fox]] }}</ref>
We're very close on the GA front, but please sort these out and we'll be good to go. - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 23:03, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
:::*It wasn't the mix of long and short citations - which is acceptable - but the long and short date formats in the sites. These have now been rectified, however.
Good effort: all OK now for the GA. Well done - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 09:05, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Schrodinger's cat is alive ( talk · contribs) 10:59, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll make a start on this in a day or so. Should be fun to review some of your stuff! - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 10:59, 18 December 2011 (UTC)
Generally a pretty sound article with no issues. I've undertaken a couple of minor copyedits. I've tried to curb my natural Britishness on spelling, grammar and punctuation, but if I suggest you do something that is wrong or awkward in Americanese, please let me know: similarly, if my copy edits have made a mess of USEng then please feel free to revert.
Only a few point to pick up on overall: nice work and if you can sort the above out in a week then it's a GA for you. Cheers - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 07:48, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
<ref name="DVDnotes">{{cite DVD-notes |title=The X-Files: The Complete Thirds Season |titlelink=The X-Files (season 3) |titleyear=1995–1996 |director=[[Chris Carter (screenwriter)|Chris Carter]], [[Howard Gordon]], et al |format=booklet |publisher=[[Fox Broadcasting Corporation|Fox]] }}</ref>
We're very close on the GA front, but please sort these out and we'll be good to go. - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 23:03, 19 December 2011 (UTC)
:::*It wasn't the mix of long and short citations - which is acceptable - but the long and short date formats in the sites. These have now been rectified, however.
Good effort: all OK now for the GA. Well done - SchroCat ( ^ • @) 09:05, 21 December 2011 (UTC)