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I cleaned up the wording, but there's one line that doesn't make much sense to me. How does a tropical depression, or even low pressure area, lack low level moisture over an ocean? Also, were no tropical cyclone-related watches or warnings issued during this systems approach to any of the south Pacific islands? If they were, they should be listed in the preparations section.
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If you want to be the one that improves the article, I can give you a week after you return. People have extended the same courtesy to me. The references have no issues, and I fixed the wording in the article a while back. It's about adding content to the preparations section before GA can be reached. Thegreatdr ( talk) 20:52, 27 April 2009 (UTC)
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I cleaned up the wording, but there's one line that doesn't make much sense to me. How does a tropical depression, or even low pressure area, lack low level moisture over an ocean? Also, were no tropical cyclone-related watches or warnings issued during this systems approach to any of the south Pacific islands? If they were, they should be listed in the preparations section.
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14:00, 25 April 2009 (UTC)
If you want to be the one that improves the article, I can give you a week after you return. People have extended the same courtesy to me. The references have no issues, and I fixed the wording in the article a while back. It's about adding content to the preparations section before GA can be reached. Thegreatdr ( talk) 20:52, 27 April 2009 (UTC)