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Partly done: The cited source within the article stated that there were at least 10 deaths between Oman and Yemen. I've updated the article accordingly. If you'd like different information in the article, please cite a
reliable source. ‑‑ElHef (
Meep?)
13:11, 27 May 2018 (UTC)reply
I'll let someone else take Bondo but seeing as I GANed like 10 articles in the past 8 months and this is my 4th GA review in general (yes, all 4 have been yours but the only other chance I have is when not one but two people tried to take GC's GAN before I could), I need to try to avoid a backlog, even if it screws up the GA reviewing balance. I'll get to this by midweek.
YEPacificHurricane08:40, 27 January 2019 (UTC)reply
"While near Socotra, Cyclone Mekunu killed 20 people when its heavy rainfall causing landslides and flooding." I'll just say this doesn't sound like your writing. You should be able to figure out what's wrong with this.
YEPacificHurricane21:31, 1 February 2019 (UTC)reply
There were two storms existing at the same time, an unusual event in the North Indian Ocean. The storm storms affected some of the same places. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
22:23, 1 February 2019 (UTC)reply
", due to decreasing wind shear and the presence of an upper-level anticyclone nearby.[2][4] " given those two are heavily correlated, that's redundant.
YEPacificHurricane21:31, 1 February 2019 (UTC)reply
"After the scope of the damage became evident on Socotra, Saudi Arabia, United Arab Emirates (UAE), Qatar, and Kuwait provided shelter, medical, and other emergency supplies. Saudi Arabia sent its first plane of aid on May 27.[11][16][12][23] The UAE also sent helicopters to search for missing people, and airlifted 17 people injured during the storm. The crew from the UAE helped reopen the island's roads.[16][12][24] " this is an easy mistake to make wen dealing with mentioning aftermath from a bunch of countries at once, but order the refs numerically.
YEPacificHurricane21:31, 1 February 2019 (UTC)\reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Weather, which collaborates on weather and related subjects on Wikipedia. To participate, help improve this article or visit the
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Partly done: The cited source within the article stated that there were at least 10 deaths between Oman and Yemen. I've updated the article accordingly. If you'd like different information in the article, please cite a
reliable source. ‑‑ElHef (
Meep?)
13:11, 27 May 2018 (UTC)reply
I'll let someone else take Bondo but seeing as I GANed like 10 articles in the past 8 months and this is my 4th GA review in general (yes, all 4 have been yours but the only other chance I have is when not one but two people tried to take GC's GAN before I could), I need to try to avoid a backlog, even if it screws up the GA reviewing balance. I'll get to this by midweek.
YEPacificHurricane08:40, 27 January 2019 (UTC)reply
"While near Socotra, Cyclone Mekunu killed 20 people when its heavy rainfall causing landslides and flooding." I'll just say this doesn't sound like your writing. You should be able to figure out what's wrong with this.
YEPacificHurricane21:31, 1 February 2019 (UTC)reply
There were two storms existing at the same time, an unusual event in the North Indian Ocean. The storm storms affected some of the same places. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
22:23, 1 February 2019 (UTC)reply
", due to decreasing wind shear and the presence of an upper-level anticyclone nearby.[2][4] " given those two are heavily correlated, that's redundant.
YEPacificHurricane21:31, 1 February 2019 (UTC)reply
"After the scope of the damage became evident on Socotra, Saudi Arabia, United Arab Emirates (UAE), Qatar, and Kuwait provided shelter, medical, and other emergency supplies. Saudi Arabia sent its first plane of aid on May 27.[11][16][12][23] The UAE also sent helicopters to search for missing people, and airlifted 17 people injured during the storm. The crew from the UAE helped reopen the island's roads.[16][12][24] " this is an easy mistake to make wen dealing with mentioning aftermath from a bunch of countries at once, but order the refs numerically.
YEPacificHurricane21:31, 1 February 2019 (UTC)\reply