"...in the middle of the Indian Ocean." (lede) "In the middle" sounds a bit awkward.
We regularly use that in the Atlantic (in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean, Gulf of Mexico, Caribbean Sea). Would you recommend "central" instead? ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
13:37, 11 October 2011 (UTC)reply
"...organized
convection, or thunderstorms." (MH) You've linked to
convection, and it basically tells what convection is, so there's no need to write "or thunderstorms".
"...in the middle of the Indian Ocean." (lede) "In the middle" sounds a bit awkward.
We regularly use that in the Atlantic (in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean, Gulf of Mexico, Caribbean Sea). Would you recommend "central" instead? ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk)
13:37, 11 October 2011 (UTC)reply
"...organized
convection, or thunderstorms." (MH) You've linked to
convection, and it basically tells what convection is, so there's no need to write "or thunderstorms".