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Hi, very interesting article, great job! Xebe22 ( talk) 12:49, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Hi, nice to meet you!
First of all, nice article and interesting topic:)
In general I found each section comprehensive and clear, as it analyses many different aspects related to the topic in a brief but still valuable way. For the sake of clarity, I'd just add a brief explanation, related to the concept of boolean operations and gaussian curvature.
However, maybe the structure of the article might be a bit refined, to balance the lenght of the two sections of "Geometry" and "Architecture and Engineering". In my opinion, a possible structure might consist of: . Explanation of curved structures and their geometry generation . History and current advancements, (also comprising the construction process) . Mechanical, acoustic and visual properties
Just a minor thing: in the construction section, it might be interesting to add also innovative practices related to curved structures, (for instance, the avoidance of timber frameworks by using knitted textiles developed by Mariana Popescu for the project "Knitted concrete") Camilla.vi ( talk) 13:01, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
I noticed that the "extrusion" link links to a german page. I don't know if this was done intentionally, so I left it there, but I also checked that the English 'extrusion' article exists, so maybe it was an error. Anyway, a very good, complete and comprehensible article, I enjoyed it! 77Davide77 ( talk) 14:03, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
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Hi, very interesting article, great job! Xebe22 ( talk) 12:49, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Hi, nice to meet you!
First of all, nice article and interesting topic:)
In general I found each section comprehensive and clear, as it analyses many different aspects related to the topic in a brief but still valuable way. For the sake of clarity, I'd just add a brief explanation, related to the concept of boolean operations and gaussian curvature.
However, maybe the structure of the article might be a bit refined, to balance the lenght of the two sections of "Geometry" and "Architecture and Engineering". In my opinion, a possible structure might consist of: . Explanation of curved structures and their geometry generation . History and current advancements, (also comprising the construction process) . Mechanical, acoustic and visual properties
Just a minor thing: in the construction section, it might be interesting to add also innovative practices related to curved structures, (for instance, the avoidance of timber frameworks by using knitted textiles developed by Mariana Popescu for the project "Knitted concrete") Camilla.vi ( talk) 13:01, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
I noticed that the "extrusion" link links to a german page. I don't know if this was done intentionally, so I left it there, but I also checked that the English 'extrusion' article exists, so maybe it was an error. Anyway, a very good, complete and comprehensible article, I enjoyed it! 77Davide77 ( talk) 14:03, 12 July 2024 (UTC)