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Reviewer: Olivaw-Daneel ( talk · contribs) 08:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
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Picking this up. Olivaw-Daneel ( talk) 08:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
Overall thoughts: this is a well-written article; I like the prose and appreciate the background information on the band. A few comments below.
meticulous rehearsaland
are in fact painstakingly precisein the lead;
meticulously composingin Recording and release. I'd attribute them as opinions (perhaps something as simple as "have been described as" instead of "are in fact", assuming a source uses "painstakingly") and/or use a more neutral descriptor.
Carl W. Stalling—who is best known for scoring cartoons like Looney Tunes and Merrie Melodies– I think this needs a source.
Please ping when done/if you have any questions. Thanks, Olivaw-Daneel ( talk) 09:16, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
@ Blz 2049: Pinging since it's been almost a week. I think the article is close to being a GA; just needs a few fixes. Olivaw-Daneel ( talk) 01:30, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Olivaw-Daneel ( talk · contribs) 08:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
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Picking this up. Olivaw-Daneel ( talk) 08:40, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
Overall thoughts: this is a well-written article; I like the prose and appreciate the background information on the band. A few comments below.
meticulous rehearsaland
are in fact painstakingly precisein the lead;
meticulously composingin Recording and release. I'd attribute them as opinions (perhaps something as simple as "have been described as" instead of "are in fact", assuming a source uses "painstakingly") and/or use a more neutral descriptor.
Carl W. Stalling—who is best known for scoring cartoons like Looney Tunes and Merrie Melodies– I think this needs a source.
Please ping when done/if you have any questions. Thanks, Olivaw-Daneel ( talk) 09:16, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
@ Blz 2049: Pinging since it's been almost a week. I think the article is close to being a GA; just needs a few fixes. Olivaw-Daneel ( talk) 01:30, 6 February 2022 (UTC)