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Reviewer: Kosack ( talk · contribs) 07:35, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
I'll take this one up as well, review coming as soon as possible.
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Lead
- Link loan to Loan (sports).
- League Two is linked twice in the lead.
Early life
- Generally countries are an WP:OVERLINK, so the Colombia and United Kingdom links are probably unnecessary.
West Ham United
- Link the first mention of loan again.
Oldham Athletic
- "He scored twice in 15 games in the first half of the 2013–14 season", needs a source.
- "as the support of friends and supporters", the support of supporters is quite repetitive in the quote caption. Can this be reworded slightly?
Port Vale
- "better at left back then when", probably worth amending then to than here as it's a minor quote error, per MOS:SIC.
References
- Avoid shouting in ref titles, per WP:ALLCAPS.
- A couple of the West Ham refs appear to have expired, refs 4 and 12 for example, can we recover these?
- Replaced and removed. Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
A few minor points, but overall this is a very tidy article. Put on hold for now while these are addressed. Kosack ( talk) 06:46, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
- Looks good to me, happy to promote. Kosack ( talk) 19:22, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Kosack ( talk · contribs) 07:35, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
I'll take this one up as well, review coming as soon as possible.
Kosack (
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07:35, 17 August 2020 (UTC)
Lead
- Link loan to Loan (sports).
- League Two is linked twice in the lead.
Early life
- Generally countries are an WP:OVERLINK, so the Colombia and United Kingdom links are probably unnecessary.
West Ham United
- Link the first mention of loan again.
Oldham Athletic
- "He scored twice in 15 games in the first half of the 2013–14 season", needs a source.
- "as the support of friends and supporters", the support of supporters is quite repetitive in the quote caption. Can this be reworded slightly?
Port Vale
- "better at left back then when", probably worth amending then to than here as it's a minor quote error, per MOS:SIC.
References
- Avoid shouting in ref titles, per WP:ALLCAPS.
- A couple of the West Ham refs appear to have expired, refs 4 and 12 for example, can we recover these?
- Replaced and removed. Echetus Xe 10:12, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
A few minor points, but overall this is a very tidy article. Put on hold for now while these are addressed. Kosack ( talk) 06:46, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
- Looks good to me, happy to promote. Kosack ( talk) 19:22, 21 August 2020 (UTC)