"Bergman and Ullmann were in a romantic relationship, and their daughter Linn Ullmann appears as Maria's daughter and Anna's daughter in the photograph" — Do you mean she appear as both those daughters? specify clearly if so.
"Academic Laura Hubner agreed with Varda Burstyn's view that Cries and Whispers depicts the suppression of women," — Burstyn is only mentioned once here. Where did Burstyn express his views? Do mention it in the article before stating about Hubner's opinions.
Try to add separate headings for the "Critical reception" section in terms of adding sub-headings like "Contemporary reviews" and "Reflective reviews".
I cannot believe I'm seeing this. It is bad enough to see editors erroneously using the phrase "Reflective reviews" instead of "Retrospective reviews", but it is appalling to see a GA Reviewer recommending an editor deliberately make such a mistake. This is why using simple English over latin terms is preferable whenever possible. --
109.76.202.17 (
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17:15, 10 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Add the years in which the films were made after each of the films you've mentioned (example: Persona (1966), Through a Glass Darkly (1961), Autumn Sonata (1978) etc).
Rewrite "work=
Rogerebert.com" as "publisher=
RogerEbert.com". (reference number 14). Rewrite "work=Rogerebert.com" as "publisher=RogerEbert.com". (reference number 19 and 79).
The URL in reference number 22 is dead/redirects to the main website. Find the URL or another one that explains its content.
This link in the "External links" section (the last one: Cries and Whispers at the Ingmar Bergman Foundation) is also dead. Fix it.
In reference number 60, remove the author's name (written as "Staff") as it is just an unnamed correspondent who has penned it. It would be better to write the name of the author only if it is stated.
In reference number 85, rewrite "Votes for VISKNINGAR OCH ROP (1972)" as "Votes for Viskningar Och Rop (1972)" as all caps is generally not accepted as per Wikipedia norms. Also wikilink "British Film Institute" in the reference.
Same as reference number 85 for number 95. Rewrite "THE 46TH ACADEMY AWARDS" as "The 46th Academy Awards".
"Bergman and Ullmann were in a romantic relationship, and their daughter Linn Ullmann appears as Maria's daughter and Anna's daughter in the photograph" — Do you mean she appear as both those daughters? specify clearly if so.
"Academic Laura Hubner agreed with Varda Burstyn's view that Cries and Whispers depicts the suppression of women," — Burstyn is only mentioned once here. Where did Burstyn express his views? Do mention it in the article before stating about Hubner's opinions.
Try to add separate headings for the "Critical reception" section in terms of adding sub-headings like "Contemporary reviews" and "Reflective reviews".
I cannot believe I'm seeing this. It is bad enough to see editors erroneously using the phrase "Reflective reviews" instead of "Retrospective reviews", but it is appalling to see a GA Reviewer recommending an editor deliberately make such a mistake. This is why using simple English over latin terms is preferable whenever possible. --
109.76.202.17 (
talk)
17:15, 10 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Add the years in which the films were made after each of the films you've mentioned (example: Persona (1966), Through a Glass Darkly (1961), Autumn Sonata (1978) etc).
Rewrite "work=
Rogerebert.com" as "publisher=
RogerEbert.com". (reference number 14). Rewrite "work=Rogerebert.com" as "publisher=RogerEbert.com". (reference number 19 and 79).
The URL in reference number 22 is dead/redirects to the main website. Find the URL or another one that explains its content.
This link in the "External links" section (the last one: Cries and Whispers at the Ingmar Bergman Foundation) is also dead. Fix it.
In reference number 60, remove the author's name (written as "Staff") as it is just an unnamed correspondent who has penned it. It would be better to write the name of the author only if it is stated.
In reference number 85, rewrite "Votes for VISKNINGAR OCH ROP (1972)" as "Votes for Viskningar Och Rop (1972)" as all caps is generally not accepted as per Wikipedia norms. Also wikilink "British Film Institute" in the reference.
Same as reference number 85 for number 95. Rewrite "THE 46TH ACADEMY AWARDS" as "The 46th Academy Awards".