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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 22:18, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
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- The first paragraph is too long, imo. It'll be good if you split it into two and add the lone sentence at the end to the second paragraph.
- "and upon released as a single peaked at number 40 in the"?
Everything else looks good. — ΛΧΣ 21 22:18, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed. Thank you. Jaespinoza ( talk) 03:06, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
- Everything else is fine. Passed. — ΛΧΣ 21 05:17, 25 December 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 22:18, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
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- The first paragraph is too long, imo. It'll be good if you split it into two and add the lone sentence at the end to the second paragraph.
- "and upon released as a single peaked at number 40 in the"?
Everything else looks good. — ΛΧΣ 21 22:18, 21 December 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed. Thank you. Jaespinoza ( talk) 03:06, 22 December 2012 (UTC)
- Everything else is fine. Passed. — ΛΧΣ 21 05:17, 25 December 2012 (UTC)