I think the fair use rationale on the Rhodes image is appropriate, and the other pic seems OK, too.
Early life and education
Do we know his parents' names?
Puerto Rico
You should make clear that Nieto Editores is a journal (i think that's what it is, based on a Google search). Maybe something like "... the journal Nieto Editores reported..."
"...while referred to as patients, they were primarily clinical subjects. " I'm not sure what the distinction is. It might benefit the reader to explain it.
Overall
This is a nice article. You've managed to keep a neutral position on what could be an inflammatory subject. I've enjoyed reading it, and look forward to the resulting of those minor issues remaining.--
Coemgenus (
talk)
14:03, 3 March 2015 (UTC)reply
I think the fair use rationale on the Rhodes image is appropriate, and the other pic seems OK, too.
Early life and education
Do we know his parents' names?
Puerto Rico
You should make clear that Nieto Editores is a journal (i think that's what it is, based on a Google search). Maybe something like "... the journal Nieto Editores reported..."
"...while referred to as patients, they were primarily clinical subjects. " I'm not sure what the distinction is. It might benefit the reader to explain it.
Overall
This is a nice article. You've managed to keep a neutral position on what could be an inflammatory subject. I've enjoyed reading it, and look forward to the resulting of those minor issues remaining.--
Coemgenus (
talk)
14:03, 3 March 2015 (UTC)reply