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I'm experienced at reviewing articles but new at AFC so if I screw up the mechanics please forgive or fix. I plan to pass this one. One comment is that for a typical reader this uses unknown technical terms to explain this unknown technical terms. Suggest rewording (starting with the lead) with more explanatory wording to fix that. Sincerely, North8000 ( talk) 20:17, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for your work. See note in talk
North8000 ( talk) 20:20, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's
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I'm experienced at reviewing articles but new at AFC so if I screw up the mechanics please forgive or fix. I plan to pass this one. One comment is that for a typical reader this uses unknown technical terms to explain this unknown technical terms. Suggest rewording (starting with the lead) with more explanatory wording to fix that. Sincerely, North8000 ( talk) 20:17, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for your work. See note in talk
North8000 ( talk) 20:20, 31 October 2023 (UTC)