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Former featured articleCool (Gwen Stefani song) is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 23, 2005 Peer reviewReviewed
October 27, 2005 Featured article candidatePromoted
November 28, 2005 Articles for deletionSpeedily kept
January 4, 2006 Featured article reviewKept
May 9, 2007 Featured topic candidatePromoted
March 28, 2010 Featured article reviewDemoted
June 16, 2010 Featured topic removal candidateDemoted
October 11, 2010 Peer reviewReviewed
November 11, 2010 Good article nomineeListed
June 2, 2011 Peer reviewReviewed
September 20, 2011 Good topic candidateNot promoted
July 31, 2020 Featured topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Former featured article, current good article

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cool (Gwen Stefani song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Adabow ( talk · contribs) 10:02, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Nice to see someone getting the FT back!

Writing and composition

Pretty comprehensive here, just a couple of comments:

  • As you mention No Doubt it may be worth including the fact that Stefani was part of the band
  • Does the caption of the sound file need to be so long? I don't think you need to write the lyrics here, as people can listen to it themselves, and it is probably not fair use to include them along with the audio sample.
  • Oh, and could the recording details be mentioned here, so that they do not need sourcing in the infobox? Adabow ( talk · contribs) 22:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Critical reception

This is not overlink New Wave? Already linked in the section above. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Chart performance

  • "...and within next eight weeks..." → ...and within the next eight weeks...
  • "It stayed on the chart eighteen weeks..." → It stayed on the chart for eighteen weeks...
  • "On other Billboard charts, the single topped the Hot Dance Club Play, as well as reached the numbers four and nine on the Adult Top 40 and Pop 100, respectively" → rewrite
  • "...dropping the chart on..." → ...dropping off/from the chart on...
  • '"Cool" became the second highest debut of the week ending September 5, 2005, at eleven' → number eleven
  • "...staying there only one week" → ..staying there for only one week
  • "...the single debuted at number eighteen soaring to number sixteen the following week..." → comma after 'eighteen'
  • "Moreover, in Austria..." I don't think that 'moreover' is a good choice of word here
All done. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
You missed one :) Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:26, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Oops.  Done Tbhotch Talk C. 23:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Still a bit iffy. How about "On other Billboard charts, the single topped the Hot Dance Club Play, reached number four on the Adult Top 40 and number nine on the Pop 100."?
Again done :) Tbhotch Talk C. 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Much better Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:51, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Music video and promotion

  • Place ref 32 at end of sentence, it looks odd before a dash.
Done
  • Maybe place inverted commas around 'cool' when you are describing Stefani's feelings in the video?
It was suggested at PR to not to do it, because it may confuse readers with the song and the word cool. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Track listings

  • {{ Col-2}} the different listings
Done Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Personnel

  • Again, {{ Col-2}} can be used here. I'm not sure about bulleting the source, I think indenting would be better.
Done Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Alphabetical order would be preferable
Orderer by their last name (or maybe you intended by their name?) excepting for Gwen who I think she is the important person here. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

References

As online sources not, but since the workers go italics, they should go in that way. Personally I won't edit war with bots and automated tools which do their job. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Then place it in the publisher field Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:26, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Done. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Add Alpha Media Group as publisher for Blender ref
done
  • The Australian Recording Industry Association does not publish the Hung Medien pages
I think is done. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:53, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Same for New Zealand. If you want to link to individual charts you can use links like [1], otherwise use the Hung Medien page for the song (as you do in Australia)
As above. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:53, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Hung Medien is a secondary source. Thus, the chart publishers do not need crediting here
Removed. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
There are still a couple of unneeded italics, but I won't worry about them as the rest of the article is of quite a high quality. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:57, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Other

  • Images, NPOV, broadness all OK
  • Has the edit war between you and SnapSnap been sorted out?
I think it is resolved. It was about what you commented on the references, about links should or not be italised. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:24, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

On hold now... Adabow ( talk · contribs) 22:46, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Passed. Well done. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:58, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Thank you and thanks for review it. Tbhotch Talk C. 00:02, 12 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Unfortunatly Harajuku Lovers Tour 2005 must be a GA for re-nominate those articles for a FT.  Doing... Tbhotch Talk C. 20:02, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Ah well, shouldn't take you too long :P Adabow ( talk · contribs) 22:46, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
lol, I don't know, songs are easier than tours, but maybe. Tbhotch Talk C. 00:02, 12 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Video

Does anyone else feel the video is obviously contradicting the lyrics? Prank or message there? -- 92.202.37.215 ( talk) 10:50, 23 January 2011 (UTC) reply

Let me reword: Has Stefani or a reviewer commented on this contradiction? -- 92.202.28.159 ( talk) 20:30, 27 January 2011 (UTC) reply
Not as far as I know. (CC) Tbhotch 17:14, 4 March 2021 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Former featured articleCool (Gwen Stefani song) is a former featured article. Please see the links under Article milestones below for its original nomination page (for older articles, check the nomination archive) and why it was removed.
Good articleCool (Gwen Stefani song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starCool (Gwen Stefani song) is part of the Love. Angel. Music. Baby. series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Main Page trophyThis article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page as Today's featured article on November 23, 2005.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
October 23, 2005 Peer reviewReviewed
October 27, 2005 Featured article candidatePromoted
November 28, 2005 Articles for deletionSpeedily kept
January 4, 2006 Featured article reviewKept
May 9, 2007 Featured topic candidatePromoted
March 28, 2010 Featured article reviewDemoted
June 16, 2010 Featured topic removal candidateDemoted
October 11, 2010 Peer reviewReviewed
November 11, 2010 Good article nomineeListed
June 2, 2011 Peer reviewReviewed
September 20, 2011 Good topic candidateNot promoted
July 31, 2020 Featured topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Former featured article, current good article

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Cool (Gwen Stefani song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Adabow ( talk · contribs) 10:02, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Nice to see someone getting the FT back!

Writing and composition

Pretty comprehensive here, just a couple of comments:

  • As you mention No Doubt it may be worth including the fact that Stefani was part of the band
  • Does the caption of the sound file need to be so long? I don't think you need to write the lyrics here, as people can listen to it themselves, and it is probably not fair use to include them along with the audio sample.
  • Oh, and could the recording details be mentioned here, so that they do not need sourcing in the infobox? Adabow ( talk · contribs) 22:50, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Critical reception

This is not overlink New Wave? Already linked in the section above. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Chart performance

  • "...and within next eight weeks..." → ...and within the next eight weeks...
  • "It stayed on the chart eighteen weeks..." → It stayed on the chart for eighteen weeks...
  • "On other Billboard charts, the single topped the Hot Dance Club Play, as well as reached the numbers four and nine on the Adult Top 40 and Pop 100, respectively" → rewrite
  • "...dropping the chart on..." → ...dropping off/from the chart on...
  • '"Cool" became the second highest debut of the week ending September 5, 2005, at eleven' → number eleven
  • "...staying there only one week" → ..staying there for only one week
  • "...the single debuted at number eighteen soaring to number sixteen the following week..." → comma after 'eighteen'
  • "Moreover, in Austria..." I don't think that 'moreover' is a good choice of word here
All done. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
You missed one :) Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:26, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Oops.  Done Tbhotch Talk C. 23:31, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Still a bit iffy. How about "On other Billboard charts, the single topped the Hot Dance Club Play, reached number four on the Adult Top 40 and number nine on the Pop 100."?
Again done :) Tbhotch Talk C. 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Much better Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:51, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Music video and promotion

  • Place ref 32 at end of sentence, it looks odd before a dash.
Done
  • Maybe place inverted commas around 'cool' when you are describing Stefani's feelings in the video?
It was suggested at PR to not to do it, because it may confuse readers with the song and the word cool. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Track listings

  • {{ Col-2}} the different listings
Done Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Personnel

  • Again, {{ Col-2}} can be used here. I'm not sure about bulleting the source, I think indenting would be better.
Done Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Alphabetical order would be preferable
Orderer by their last name (or maybe you intended by their name?) excepting for Gwen who I think she is the important person here. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

References

As online sources not, but since the workers go italics, they should go in that way. Personally I won't edit war with bots and automated tools which do their job. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:08, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Then place it in the publisher field Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:26, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Done. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Add Alpha Media Group as publisher for Blender ref
done
  • The Australian Recording Industry Association does not publish the Hung Medien pages
I think is done. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:53, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Same for New Zealand. If you want to link to individual charts you can use links like [1], otherwise use the Hung Medien page for the song (as you do in Australia)
As above. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:53, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
  • Hung Medien is a secondary source. Thus, the chart publishers do not need crediting here
Removed. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:44, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
There are still a couple of unneeded italics, but I won't worry about them as the rest of the article is of quite a high quality. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:57, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Other

  • Images, NPOV, broadness all OK
  • Has the edit war between you and SnapSnap been sorted out?
I think it is resolved. It was about what you commented on the references, about links should or not be italised. Tbhotch Talk C. 23:24, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

On hold now... Adabow ( talk · contribs) 22:46, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Passed. Well done. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 23:58, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Thank you and thanks for review it. Tbhotch Talk C. 00:02, 12 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Unfortunatly Harajuku Lovers Tour 2005 must be a GA for re-nominate those articles for a FT.  Doing... Tbhotch Talk C. 20:02, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
Ah well, shouldn't take you too long :P Adabow ( talk · contribs) 22:46, 11 November 2010 (UTC) reply
lol, I don't know, songs are easier than tours, but maybe. Tbhotch Talk C. 00:02, 12 November 2010 (UTC) reply

Video

Does anyone else feel the video is obviously contradicting the lyrics? Prank or message there? -- 92.202.37.215 ( talk) 10:50, 23 January 2011 (UTC) reply

Let me reword: Has Stefani or a reviewer commented on this contradiction? -- 92.202.28.159 ( talk) 20:30, 27 January 2011 (UTC) reply
Not as far as I know. (CC) Tbhotch 17:14, 4 March 2021 (UTC) reply

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