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I have revised this article to address the reviewer's comments from the first submission. Please find below three sources that demonstrate the notability of this topic:

“Comparing CFD Software - Part 3: Semi-Comprehensive Software.” Resolved Analytics. April 10, 2019. https://www.resolvedanalytics.com/theflux/comparing-cfd-software-part-3-semi-comprehensive-cfd-software.

Bailey, Nick. "Power tool: How state-of-the-art software is revolutionising engine tuning." Racecar Engineering Magazine, March 2015.

Haight, Brent. “Convergent Science Eyes Gas Compression.” Gas Compression Magazine, November 2017. https://gascompressionmagazine.com/2017/11/14/convergent-science-eyes-gas-compression/. Esbf0711 ( talk) 14:55, 5 February 2020 (UTC) reply

The article assumes a great deal of knowledge and does not seem friendly to non-specialist users. I have done an edit to show the sort of thing that may be required. Another example is "CFD" software. I don't know what this is. Presumably it is an acronym for something. I don't ask for dumbing down -just changes making this readable for the reasonably well educated general reader. I agree wholeheartedly with the comments on the article appearing to be "promotional" Spinney Hill ( talk) 09:17, 20 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Work has been done on the promotional problems and I have made some more alterations but more work needs to be done to make the article more friendly to the general reader.. Keep up the good work. Spinney Hill ( talk) 07:50, 30 July 2021 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Untitled

I have revised this article to address the reviewer's comments from the first submission. Please find below three sources that demonstrate the notability of this topic:

“Comparing CFD Software - Part 3: Semi-Comprehensive Software.” Resolved Analytics. April 10, 2019. https://www.resolvedanalytics.com/theflux/comparing-cfd-software-part-3-semi-comprehensive-cfd-software.

Bailey, Nick. "Power tool: How state-of-the-art software is revolutionising engine tuning." Racecar Engineering Magazine, March 2015.

Haight, Brent. “Convergent Science Eyes Gas Compression.” Gas Compression Magazine, November 2017. https://gascompressionmagazine.com/2017/11/14/convergent-science-eyes-gas-compression/. Esbf0711 ( talk) 14:55, 5 February 2020 (UTC) reply

The article assumes a great deal of knowledge and does not seem friendly to non-specialist users. I have done an edit to show the sort of thing that may be required. Another example is "CFD" software. I don't know what this is. Presumably it is an acronym for something. I don't ask for dumbing down -just changes making this readable for the reasonably well educated general reader. I agree wholeheartedly with the comments on the article appearing to be "promotional" Spinney Hill ( talk) 09:17, 20 April 2020 (UTC) reply

Work has been done on the promotional problems and I have made some more alterations but more work needs to be done to make the article more friendly to the general reader.. Keep up the good work. Spinney Hill ( talk) 07:50, 30 July 2021 (UTC) reply


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