was mainly written by Lohan as a letter to her father -> problematic; mainly serving as a letter, or mainly written by Lohan. The latter is not verifiable, so I suggest you remove it
The song spent thirteen weeks on the chart, peaking at number forty-five on the last -> You said it peaked at number seven....?
"reaching number seven in Australia on the week of its debut on chart. The song spent thirteen weeks on the chart, peaking at number forty-five on the last." I don't see any problem with this: it peaked at number seven on the week of its debut on chart, and stayed on it for thirteen weeks, peaking at number forty-five on the last week. -
Sauloviegas (
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22:56, 8 September 2011 (UTC)reply
What about live performances? For one I know she sang (over heavy-back-track and playback) at the AMAs
I'm trying to find more info. It looks like she also performed the song at TRL. I'll fix the lead and add info to this section as soon as I find it. -
Sauloviegas (
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22:56, 8 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Misc
Why are so many references with parameters in italics? Only works that are printed sources (such as Billboard) should be in italics, not Allmusic and iTunes.
was mainly written by Lohan as a letter to her father -> problematic; mainly serving as a letter, or mainly written by Lohan. The latter is not verifiable, so I suggest you remove it
The song spent thirteen weeks on the chart, peaking at number forty-five on the last -> You said it peaked at number seven....?
"reaching number seven in Australia on the week of its debut on chart. The song spent thirteen weeks on the chart, peaking at number forty-five on the last." I don't see any problem with this: it peaked at number seven on the week of its debut on chart, and stayed on it for thirteen weeks, peaking at number forty-five on the last week. -
Sauloviegas (
talk)
22:56, 8 September 2011 (UTC)reply
What about live performances? For one I know she sang (over heavy-back-track and playback) at the AMAs
I'm trying to find more info. It looks like she also performed the song at TRL. I'll fix the lead and add info to this section as soon as I find it. -
Sauloviegas (
talk)
22:56, 8 September 2011 (UTC)reply
Misc
Why are so many references with parameters in italics? Only works that are printed sources (such as Billboard) should be in italics, not Allmusic and iTunes.