I'd race you to finish respective series if there wasn't such a difference in episode numbers.
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
Gave the article a copy-edit myself, should be in shape now. It's up to you, though, but I would perhaps link the references to different seasons, such as in " Fringe credit since the season two episode "August"." I'm also not sure about the phrase "fairly positive to mixed reviews". "Mixed to positive" might be better, or even "mixed to fairly positive". I think scaling upwards seems more natural.
Scope is fine here. I'm always interested in seeing information on physical effects but it seems that kind of source hasn't surfaced yet. Be nice if it did some day—Bob Comer does some nice work, especially on some of those old Millennium eps.
Thanks very much for the review! Your copyedit looked great. I have made the changes you suggested. Production info is always difficult to track down (I wish Fringe had the same written works as The X-Files... maybe some day...). Thanks again, Ruby2010/201304:44, 7 January 2012 (UTC)reply
I'd race you to finish respective series if there wasn't such a difference in episode numbers.
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
Gave the article a copy-edit myself, should be in shape now. It's up to you, though, but I would perhaps link the references to different seasons, such as in " Fringe credit since the season two episode "August"." I'm also not sure about the phrase "fairly positive to mixed reviews". "Mixed to positive" might be better, or even "mixed to fairly positive". I think scaling upwards seems more natural.
Scope is fine here. I'm always interested in seeing information on physical effects but it seems that kind of source hasn't surfaced yet. Be nice if it did some day—Bob Comer does some nice work, especially on some of those old Millennium eps.
Thanks very much for the review! Your copyedit looked great. I have made the changes you suggested. Production info is always difficult to track down (I wish Fringe had the same written works as The X-Files... maybe some day...). Thanks again, Ruby2010/201304:44, 7 January 2012 (UTC)reply