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Till I Go Home (
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11:05, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
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I will review the article:)
Till I Go Home (
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11:05, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
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- Thanks.
Aaron •
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11:26, 8 February 2012 (UTC)
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Lead
- "..it was one of the best to be included on Loud" --> it was one of the best tracks to be included on Loud.
Done
Aaron •
You Da One
- "the song chart at number 50 on the South Korea Gaon International Chart." ...I think you mean "charted"?
Done
Aaron •
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Background and inspiration
- I think it would be better if you replaced "relatable" with "applicable".
Done
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Composition
- "Mackay also noted that the singer.." remove "also"
Done
Aaron •
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- "Chad Grischow of IGN noted that Rihanna" replace noted with something else (like stated) because of repetition.
Done
Aaron •
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Critical reception
- "reminiscent of songs by English pop girl group, Sugababes" -> Remove "pop" wikilink per
WP:OVERLINK.
Done
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- "labeling it as "cluttered" and the albums "low-point". The correct grammar is "album's", not "albums".
Done
Aaron •
You Da One
- "Colin Gentry of 4Music described the song as the highlight of the album" -> Colin Gentry of 4Music named the song the highlight of the album
Done
Aaron •
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Overall
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GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (
MoS for
lead,
layout,
word choice,
fiction, and
lists):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to
reliable sources):
c (
OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Overall a well-written article, issues have been addressed, passing GAN.
Till I Go Home (
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- Thanks.
Aaron •
You Da One
13:14, 10 February 2012 (UTC)
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