This is a
gangster film as opposed to being just a crime film.
"tension arises" — Should be "tensions arise"
"after a meeting with a man named Haneef" — Can be rephrased as "after meeting a man named Haneef"
"Malik and Chandu kill Saeed and his brother Anis in the rear seat of a car." — Elaborate on who Saeed is to let readers know why Malik and Chandu killed him and Anis.
"His rival gang leader and colleague under Aslam's umbrella Sharma, who was in a meeting with police inspector Rathod, is killed." — Who is Aslam and who was the cast member who played him? If he's not that important, remove him from the sentence altogether.
Wikilink Home Minister.
"Haneef was shot dead a few months after Varma met him" — Did it impact the film in anyway? If not, it seems unnecessary and can be removed.
"He later met several crime reporters, police officers and associates of gangsters" — Regarding the film? if so, state that in the sentence.
What did Varma mean by "profound-sounding"?
Of course, wikilink the references on the first instance of them being mentioned.
This is a
gangster film as opposed to being just a crime film.
"tension arises" — Should be "tensions arise"
"after a meeting with a man named Haneef" — Can be rephrased as "after meeting a man named Haneef"
"Malik and Chandu kill Saeed and his brother Anis in the rear seat of a car." — Elaborate on who Saeed is to let readers know why Malik and Chandu killed him and Anis.
"His rival gang leader and colleague under Aslam's umbrella Sharma, who was in a meeting with police inspector Rathod, is killed." — Who is Aslam and who was the cast member who played him? If he's not that important, remove him from the sentence altogether.
Wikilink Home Minister.
"Haneef was shot dead a few months after Varma met him" — Did it impact the film in anyway? If not, it seems unnecessary and can be removed.
"He later met several crime reporters, police officers and associates of gangsters" — Regarding the film? if so, state that in the sentence.
What did Varma mean by "profound-sounding"?
Of course, wikilink the references on the first instance of them being mentioned.