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I made a couple minor tweaks to make things sound a bit more formal and flowing. Per the subject's nationality,
MOS:ENGVAR for Canadian English seems to be properly upheld here. I also unlinked common instruments and corrected some typos.
Random checks of sources showed them to all be valid and free of
WP:OR. Good breadth of sources including Billboard, The Tennessean, and contemporary sources.
Two things I thought of. Since Twain is Canadian, maybe emphasize the Canadian charts first, particularly the RPM Country Tracks. Most of these should be available at worldradiohistory.com. In particular, I believe the title track actually debuted at number one on the RPM Country Tracks charts, which seems like a noteworthy fact. I would also recommend adding a source to clarify that the pop version of "From This Moment On" was re-recorded without Bryan White.
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TenPoundHammer: Thanks a lot for your suggestions, input, and for the quick review! I see that you tried to do something with the lead section, but didn't quite finished, "Similar to its predecessor The Woman in Me (1995), For Come On Over, Twain entirely collaborated with producer and then-husband Robert John "Mutt" Lange." Could you finish your idea? –
TabooMatters94 (
talk)
21:28, 3 June 2023 (UTC)reply
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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
I made a couple minor tweaks to make things sound a bit more formal and flowing. Per the subject's nationality,
MOS:ENGVAR for Canadian English seems to be properly upheld here. I also unlinked common instruments and corrected some typos.
Random checks of sources showed them to all be valid and free of
WP:OR. Good breadth of sources including Billboard, The Tennessean, and contemporary sources.
Two things I thought of. Since Twain is Canadian, maybe emphasize the Canadian charts first, particularly the RPM Country Tracks. Most of these should be available at worldradiohistory.com. In particular, I believe the title track actually debuted at number one on the RPM Country Tracks charts, which seems like a noteworthy fact. I would also recommend adding a source to clarify that the pop version of "From This Moment On" was re-recorded without Bryan White.
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TenPoundHammer: Thanks a lot for your suggestions, input, and for the quick review! I see that you tried to do something with the lead section, but didn't quite finished, "Similar to its predecessor The Woman in Me (1995), For Come On Over, Twain entirely collaborated with producer and then-husband Robert John "Mutt" Lange." Could you finish your idea? –
TabooMatters94 (
talk)
21:28, 3 June 2023 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.