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Remove sourcing for "Grade", "First ascent", and "First free ascent", as they are all mentioned in the body.
Done
Please mention the location of the climb in the body and source it there instead rather than the infobox.
Done
After repulsing many leading climbers – most notably by Swiss climber Didier Berthod in 2005 – Canadian climber Sonnie Trotter made the first free ascent in 2006. , replace repulsing with something more formal, then replace the endashes with commas.
Done
5.14b (8c) , add comma at the end.
Done
History
Wikipedia:Proseline. Probably integrate the years within the paragraph rather than at the starting point.
Done, I had to re-word the first paragraph's two lead sentences to make it flow
free the route, I'm guessing this refers to free climbing? Hyperlink if so. Also reword to "free climb the route".
Done, and hyperlinked
Route
The route has an abrasive surface, add comma at the end.
Done
circa 30 metres, circa 45 degrees, use a
c. template.
The technical crux, is crux a climbing term? If so, hyperlink as well.
Done
In 2006, Trotter said: "The redpoint crux comes over the lip on a slippery side pull; the feet are next to nothing, and it takes momentum and a huge throw to latch the final edge, at which point you're about 15 to 20 feet about your last piece of gear—it's really exciting"., I think you should paraphrase the quote.
Not done, Trotter is a major figure in climbing, so I though it was good to quote his reaction, i.e. direct "from the horse's mouth" so to speak? If you feel strongly however I can paraphrase? thanks
That's fair.
Legacy
beautiful as ever"., put period within the quotes as it's stated as such in the source.
Done
Ascents
Would like to know why there are two 1sts mentioned.
Add endash at the end to break up notes. First Ascent: The Movie (2005), Peter Mortimer. Sender Films. ASIN B000IWPP4G. – Documentary with Didier Berthold.
Done
Images
Images have proper licenses, relevant.
Probably change the first image's caption to "Crack seen from the ground".
Done
Refs
Manual check, everything seems okay.
Earwig picks up quotes, pass.
Spotchecks
Random references check, 5, 14, 18, 24, all seem good.
Misc
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
... that when
Didier Berthod failed to make the
first free ascent of Cobra Crack(pictured) in 2005, he quit climbing and became a Franciscan monk, but returned in 2024 to make the 20th ascent?
Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks ready to go.
Thriley (
talk)
03:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Aszx5000 A few things need to be rephrased per
Earwig. Even little parts like "the first free ascent" and "one of the hardest crack climbs in the world" can, and should, be rephrased. Those are just two examples.
SL93 (
talk)
01:45, 23 July 2024 (UTC)reply
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Remove sourcing for "Grade", "First ascent", and "First free ascent", as they are all mentioned in the body.
Done
Please mention the location of the climb in the body and source it there instead rather than the infobox.
Done
After repulsing many leading climbers – most notably by Swiss climber Didier Berthod in 2005 – Canadian climber Sonnie Trotter made the first free ascent in 2006. , replace repulsing with something more formal, then replace the endashes with commas.
Done
5.14b (8c) , add comma at the end.
Done
History
Wikipedia:Proseline. Probably integrate the years within the paragraph rather than at the starting point.
Done, I had to re-word the first paragraph's two lead sentences to make it flow
free the route, I'm guessing this refers to free climbing? Hyperlink if so. Also reword to "free climb the route".
Done, and hyperlinked
Route
The route has an abrasive surface, add comma at the end.
Done
circa 30 metres, circa 45 degrees, use a
c. template.
The technical crux, is crux a climbing term? If so, hyperlink as well.
Done
In 2006, Trotter said: "The redpoint crux comes over the lip on a slippery side pull; the feet are next to nothing, and it takes momentum and a huge throw to latch the final edge, at which point you're about 15 to 20 feet about your last piece of gear—it's really exciting"., I think you should paraphrase the quote.
Not done, Trotter is a major figure in climbing, so I though it was good to quote his reaction, i.e. direct "from the horse's mouth" so to speak? If you feel strongly however I can paraphrase? thanks
That's fair.
Legacy
beautiful as ever"., put period within the quotes as it's stated as such in the source.
Done
Ascents
Would like to know why there are two 1sts mentioned.
Add endash at the end to break up notes. First Ascent: The Movie (2005), Peter Mortimer. Sender Films. ASIN B000IWPP4G. – Documentary with Didier Berthold.
Done
Images
Images have proper licenses, relevant.
Probably change the first image's caption to "Crack seen from the ground".
Done
Refs
Manual check, everything seems okay.
Earwig picks up quotes, pass.
Spotchecks
Random references check, 5, 14, 18, 24, all seem good.
Misc
No ongoing edit war, article is focused and broad on the topic being discussed.
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
... that when
Didier Berthod failed to make the
first free ascent of Cobra Crack(pictured) in 2005, he quit climbing and became a Franciscan monk, but returned in 2024 to make the 20th ascent?
Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks ready to go.
Thriley (
talk)
03:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Aszx5000 A few things need to be rephrased per
Earwig. Even little parts like "the first free ascent" and "one of the hardest crack climbs in the world" can, and should, be rephrased. Those are just two examples.
SL93 (
talk)
01:45, 23 July 2024 (UTC)reply