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I have this on hold pending a couple of issues I have that, I think, can easily be rectified. It's a short article and I understand you don't have too much to work with, but that doesn't mean it can't be improved.
OK, more. ...
In the last sentence we learn that "While the use of the coat of arms is restricted to the government, the symbol enjoys wide use on the national currency, state decorations and appears on the cover of the national passport." That's not surprising, and we don't need that level of detail in the intro.
Perhaps we could explain what the five stars and moon symbolize rather than assuming people will click on the flag article for it?
I will go through later and try to tighten up the wording. Meanwhile these need to be addressed. Daniel Case ( talk) 05:23, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
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I have this on hold pending a couple of issues I have that, I think, can easily be rectified. It's a short article and I understand you don't have too much to work with, but that doesn't mean it can't be improved.
OK, more. ...
In the last sentence we learn that "While the use of the coat of arms is restricted to the government, the symbol enjoys wide use on the national currency, state decorations and appears on the cover of the national passport." That's not surprising, and we don't need that level of detail in the intro.
Perhaps we could explain what the five stars and moon symbolize rather than assuming people will click on the flag article for it?
I will go through later and try to tighten up the wording. Meanwhile these need to be addressed. Daniel Case ( talk) 05:23, 3 February 2009 (UTC)