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Reviewer: Pamzeis ( talk · contribs) 12:52, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
Hiya! I'll be reviewing this one. Will try not to screw anything up.
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While being promoted as a country album, a number of tracks feature styles of— I'm not sure this bit is entirely grammatically correct. The beginning phrase (
While being promoted as a country albumis linked to
a number of tracks, not Red. So this bit would be saying grammatically that a number of tracks were promoted as a country album.
Swift finished writing "Clean" before meeting Heap in London— this bit feels a bit off to me, 'cuz it's not established before that Swift was going to meet Heap in London. I feel like it could use a bit of copy editing.
including Arlington, Texas (April 1) and East Rutherford, New Jersey (May 28).— I don't think "including" works here, as those were the only dates she performed it AFAIK, but "including" is "used for saying that a person or thing is part of a particular group or amount"
Like the rest of the album— not entirely clear what album we're talking about here
Its lyrics depicts difficulty in letting go of a broken relationship.? I don't see it
Overall, this article's in very good shape and close to GA-status. Putting it
on hold for now!
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12:52, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
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I've made a few edits here and there. I think that this article is finally clean for GA-status. Pamzeis ( talk) 14:42, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Pamzeis ( talk · contribs) 12:52, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
Hiya! I'll be reviewing this one. Will try not to screw anything up.
Pamzeis (
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12:52, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
While being promoted as a country album, a number of tracks feature styles of— I'm not sure this bit is entirely grammatically correct. The beginning phrase (
While being promoted as a country albumis linked to
a number of tracks, not Red. So this bit would be saying grammatically that a number of tracks were promoted as a country album.
Swift finished writing "Clean" before meeting Heap in London— this bit feels a bit off to me, 'cuz it's not established before that Swift was going to meet Heap in London. I feel like it could use a bit of copy editing.
including Arlington, Texas (April 1) and East Rutherford, New Jersey (May 28).— I don't think "including" works here, as those were the only dates she performed it AFAIK, but "including" is "used for saying that a person or thing is part of a particular group or amount"
Like the rest of the album— not entirely clear what album we're talking about here
Its lyrics depicts difficulty in letting go of a broken relationship.? I don't see it
Overall, this article's in very good shape and close to GA-status. Putting it
on hold for now!
Pamzeis (
talk)
12:52, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
Good Article review progress box
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I've made a few edits here and there. I think that this article is finally clean for GA-status. Pamzeis ( talk) 14:42, 3 November 2023 (UTC)
Good Article review progress box
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