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music critics who praised the instruments used and compared it to her" → "
music critics, who praised the instruments used and compared it to Shakira's"
"It was nominated in" → "The song was nominated in"
"and was a recipient of an" → "and was a recipient of a"
"The track was included in" → "The song was included in"
"After Shakira rose to prominence with the success of her major-label debut" → "After rising to prominence with the success of her major-label debut album"
"into the US Latin market. One of Shakira's concerns" → "into the US
Latin market, though one of Shakira's concerns" with the pipe
"the roles and duties were defined:" → "the roles and duties were finalized:"
"on this project"." → "on this project."" per
MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
"Since then, they started working on" → "After that, they started working at"
"on end, I wouldn't stop"." → "on end, I wouldn't stop."" also, this sentence needs the appropriate citation(s) at the end
Reword the sentence to something like the Los Angeles Times writer noted Shakira's "disjointed robotic movements" while she performed the track at the Arrowhead Pond in 2000
The video should be linked to in the infobox instead of here
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice work on this! --
K. Peake 10:36, 12 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Thanks! Let me finish the GAR for
Dejaría Todo, then I will get to this article!
Erick (
talk) 18:32, 17 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Magiciandude No problem with that whatsoever; I gladly await your response! --
K. Peake 20:47, 17 June 2022 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle PeakeAnd...done! Well ok, so I deviated a bit with the suggestions, namely not using work and publisher simultaneously for sources. I based this on the last GAR I had. For the personnel, it's meant to be in alphabetical order, but I screwed up a bit, and now it's fixed! How's the article look now?
Erick (
talk) 14:53, 20 June 2022 (UTC)reply
✓Pass now, the refs look fine really! --
K. Peake 15:04, 20 June 2022 (UTC)reply
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Image:Shakirahot.JPG is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under
fair use but there is no
explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the
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Please go to
the image description page and edit it to include a
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"
music critics who praised the instruments used and compared it to her" → "
music critics, who praised the instruments used and compared it to Shakira's"
"It was nominated in" → "The song was nominated in"
"and was a recipient of an" → "and was a recipient of a"
"The track was included in" → "The song was included in"
"After Shakira rose to prominence with the success of her major-label debut" → "After rising to prominence with the success of her major-label debut album"
"into the US Latin market. One of Shakira's concerns" → "into the US
Latin market, though one of Shakira's concerns" with the pipe
"the roles and duties were defined:" → "the roles and duties were finalized:"
"on this project"." → "on this project."" per
MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
"Since then, they started working on" → "After that, they started working at"
"on end, I wouldn't stop"." → "on end, I wouldn't stop."" also, this sentence needs the appropriate citation(s) at the end
Reword the sentence to something like the Los Angeles Times writer noted Shakira's "disjointed robotic movements" while she performed the track at the Arrowhead Pond in 2000
The video should be linked to in the infobox instead of here
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; nice work on this! --
K. Peake 10:36, 12 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Thanks! Let me finish the GAR for
Dejaría Todo, then I will get to this article!
Erick (
talk) 18:32, 17 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Magiciandude No problem with that whatsoever; I gladly await your response! --
K. Peake 20:47, 17 June 2022 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle PeakeAnd...done! Well ok, so I deviated a bit with the suggestions, namely not using work and publisher simultaneously for sources. I based this on the last GAR I had. For the personnel, it's meant to be in alphabetical order, but I screwed up a bit, and now it's fixed! How's the article look now?
Erick (
talk) 14:53, 20 June 2022 (UTC)reply
✓Pass now, the refs look fine really! --
K. Peake 15:04, 20 June 2022 (UTC)reply