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Argento Surfer (
talk) 14:03, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Lead
The second sentence is clunky. I suggest "Six episodes aired on GSN between June 15, 2003 and July 27, 2003.", but there are other ways to fix it.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
Source 11 has an access date of 2008. In the (unlikely) event that is not a typo, something more current will be needed for the claim the show has "never been released" on home media.
This was a typo; I just added that access date last night. I have amended the issue. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 15:26, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
How did the show air in relation to Lingo? Did they air back-to-back? Were the game episodes paired with the reality episodes that featured behind the scenes information?
It would have made sense to me if they aired in the same block, but I can't find anything that details the exact programming schedule or how the two aired in relation. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 17:26, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
I've been told in the past that captions for show logos/title cards are unnecessary (none of my other GAs or FAs have them). I have added the ALT text though. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 15:26, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
That works for me.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
@
Argento Surfer: Now I believe I'm done everything addressed so far. Thanks again. Let me know if you need anything else. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 15:34, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Notes are finished. Pass pending responses.
Argento Surfer (
talk) 16:27, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Television, a collaborative effort to develop and improve Wikipedia articles about
television programs. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page where you can
join the discussion.
To improve this article, please refer to the
style guidelines for the type of work.TelevisionWikipedia:WikiProject TelevisionTemplate:WikiProject Televisiontelevision articles
I'll be offline over the weekend, so I won't be able to respond to any comments until Monday. If you disagree with any of my comments, don't hesitate to argue them - I'm willing to be persuaded. Once complete, I'll be using this review to score points in the 2018 Wikicup.
Argento Surfer (
talk) 14:03, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Lead
The second sentence is clunky. I suggest "Six episodes aired on GSN between June 15, 2003 and July 27, 2003.", but there are other ways to fix it.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
Source 11 has an access date of 2008. In the (unlikely) event that is not a typo, something more current will be needed for the claim the show has "never been released" on home media.
This was a typo; I just added that access date last night. I have amended the issue. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 15:26, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
How did the show air in relation to Lingo? Did they air back-to-back? Were the game episodes paired with the reality episodes that featured behind the scenes information?
It would have made sense to me if they aired in the same block, but I can't find anything that details the exact programming schedule or how the two aired in relation. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 17:26, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
I've been told in the past that captions for show logos/title cards are unnecessary (none of my other GAs or FAs have them). I have added the ALT text though. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 15:26, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
That works for me.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
@
Argento Surfer: Now I believe I'm done everything addressed so far. Thanks again. Let me know if you need anything else. --
Bcschneider53 (
talk) 15:34, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply
Notes are finished. Pass pending responses.
Argento Surfer (
talk) 16:27, 26 January 2018 (UTC)reply