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Nominator: Snoteleks ( talk · contribs) 13:09, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Recon rabbit 21:57, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Adequately summarizes all the major points within the article.
They present genetic sequences of non-photosynthetic plastids, an evidence of their phototroph ancestry.[8]"Evidence" is an uncountable noun, so "an" should be removed, though it might make the structure of the sentence awkward. Could be refactored.
They contain one chloroplast in each cell,[8] with chlorophyll a as their only chlorophyll,[12] violaxanthin, and β-carotene.[8]Is chlorophyll a their only chlorophyll, their only violaxanthon, and their only β-carotene, or are the latter two distinct things that are also present in the cell or present in the chloroplast?
Although the inclusion of colpodellids within apicomplexans was not supported by other authors, phylogenetic studies demonstrated that they were sister clades.[17]I might be missing something here, but isn't Apicomplexa a phylum and Colpodellida a clade? Better described as "sister groups" as is done in the source.
Well cited. Only missing citations are under "Classification" for Alphamonas and Colpodellaceae, but I see these are summarized in [3].
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None found through Earwig.
Only one image, but it is properly licensed, attributed, and represents a member of this clade.
I didn't forget! Working through the later criteris now and will continue in the morning. Recon rabbit 01:56, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
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(Non-reviewer comment) How useful is it to include red links to the carotenoids vaucheriaxanthin and isofucoxanthin? The latter doesn't seem to have much documentation in literature due to the prevalence of fucoxanthin. Recon rabbit 14:37, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: Snoteleks ( talk · contribs) 13:09, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Recon rabbit 21:57, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
Adequately summarizes all the major points within the article.
They present genetic sequences of non-photosynthetic plastids, an evidence of their phototroph ancestry.[8]"Evidence" is an uncountable noun, so "an" should be removed, though it might make the structure of the sentence awkward. Could be refactored.
They contain one chloroplast in each cell,[8] with chlorophyll a as their only chlorophyll,[12] violaxanthin, and β-carotene.[8]Is chlorophyll a their only chlorophyll, their only violaxanthon, and their only β-carotene, or are the latter two distinct things that are also present in the cell or present in the chloroplast?
Although the inclusion of colpodellids within apicomplexans was not supported by other authors, phylogenetic studies demonstrated that they were sister clades.[17]I might be missing something here, but isn't Apicomplexa a phylum and Colpodellida a clade? Better described as "sister groups" as is done in the source.
Well cited. Only missing citations are under "Classification" for Alphamonas and Colpodellaceae, but I see these are summarized in [3].
Referring to this version:
None found through Earwig.
Only one image, but it is properly licensed, attributed, and represents a member of this clade.
I didn't forget! Working through the later criteris now and will continue in the morning. Recon rabbit 01:56, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
Good Article review progress box
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(Non-reviewer comment) How useful is it to include red links to the carotenoids vaucheriaxanthin and isofucoxanthin? The latter doesn't seem to have much documentation in literature due to the prevalence of fucoxanthin. Recon rabbit 14:37, 6 June 2024 (UTC)