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August 14, 2008. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the developers of the
video game
Chocolatier took the guided tour of
Scharffen Berger Chocolate Maker's factory to see how
chocolate is made? | ||||||||||||
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Hi. I'm going to review this GAC! Intothewoods29 ( talk) 16:31, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
Hey, I read this, and I cleaned up some of the prose and grammar, but I'm going to put this on hold because I don't think it properly addresses everything that it could (GA requirement #3). Below are some of my suggestions:
Other than that... everything should be okay. It looks like this article was built very quickly, so good job! Just tell me when you finish! :) Intothewoods29 ( talk) 18:05, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for your time reading the article and making edits, I'd like to bounce some ideas off you before trying to do what needs doing:
Too bad about the other info, but I think the article is good enough to pass, so I'm going to promote this article to GA. The above stuff you might want to improve on before you go for FA, and you might consider expanding the lead by one paragraph to be on the safe side. But otherwise, good work!
1.organized, well-written
2.reliable refs
3.relevant info
4.NPOV
5.stable
6.pics have tags
Good job again! Keep working to improve this article and more articles that need help! :) Intothewoods29 ( talk) 23:12, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
I'll take a good look into what you've suggested, thank you very much for your time. Someone another 23:25, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
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Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
August 14, 2008. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the developers of the
video game
Chocolatier took the guided tour of
Scharffen Berger Chocolate Maker's factory to see how
chocolate is made? | ||||||||||||
Current status: Good article |
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Hi. I'm going to review this GAC! Intothewoods29 ( talk) 16:31, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
Hey, I read this, and I cleaned up some of the prose and grammar, but I'm going to put this on hold because I don't think it properly addresses everything that it could (GA requirement #3). Below are some of my suggestions:
Other than that... everything should be okay. It looks like this article was built very quickly, so good job! Just tell me when you finish! :) Intothewoods29 ( talk) 18:05, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
Thanks for your time reading the article and making edits, I'd like to bounce some ideas off you before trying to do what needs doing:
Too bad about the other info, but I think the article is good enough to pass, so I'm going to promote this article to GA. The above stuff you might want to improve on before you go for FA, and you might consider expanding the lead by one paragraph to be on the safe side. But otherwise, good work!
1.organized, well-written
2.reliable refs
3.relevant info
4.NPOV
5.stable
6.pics have tags
Good job again! Keep working to improve this article and more articles that need help! :) Intothewoods29 ( talk) 23:12, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
I'll take a good look into what you've suggested, thank you very much for your time. Someone another 23:25, 7 August 2008 (UTC)