"liberation of Korea" in Creating model literature in North Korea
"Rodong Sinmun", "Han Sorya", "Mayakovsky" in Mt. Paektu
Prose is excellent.
Call him Cho consistently throughout the article
Perhaps "Death" should come last in the article
Lead
All good
Life and career
Begin the article with his full name
Jo Myeong-hui Who exactly is this?
Add a few words on what Komosomol was
Works
some South Korean scholars For example? Also see South Korean scholars have presented two competing views
Who is Alzo David-West?
Thank you for taking up this review,
Sainsf. I believe I have addressed all of the issues raised above (see edit history and summaries). If you have further questions about these improvements, or have new edits to suggest, I'll avail myself to fix them of course. –
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"liberation of Korea" in Creating model literature in North Korea
"Rodong Sinmun", "Han Sorya", "Mayakovsky" in Mt. Paektu
Prose is excellent.
Call him Cho consistently throughout the article
Perhaps "Death" should come last in the article
Lead
All good
Life and career
Begin the article with his full name
Jo Myeong-hui Who exactly is this?
Add a few words on what Komosomol was
Works
some South Korean scholars For example? Also see South Korean scholars have presented two competing views
Who is Alzo David-West?
Thank you for taking up this review,
Sainsf. I believe I have addressed all of the issues raised above (see edit history and summaries). If you have further questions about these improvements, or have new edits to suggest, I'll avail myself to fix them of course. –
Finnusertop (
talk ⋅
contribs)
22:09, 28 June 2016 (UTC)reply