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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 21 January 2020 and 16 May 2020. Further details are available
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Cassitymega.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 18:56, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Cassitymega, regarding this and this, there are issues with you edits. For example, WP:Tone issues. That stated, I'm not going to revert again. Flyer22 Frozen ( talk) 00:24, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
The tone isn't that bad, though. Regarding this? References aren't placed like that. They should be after a sentence or paragraph. Flyer22 Frozen ( talk) 00:27, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
- Hi @Flyer22Frozen I made the edits on the references like you suggested. I also edited the piece for tone and made some adjustments. With respect to the original authors, I believe my edits are a significant improvement upon the original entry. The sources, with the exception of the article on activists, are all academic or from government documents and all have working links. Cassitymega ( talk) 00:52, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 21 January 2020 and 16 May 2020. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
Cassitymega.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 18:56, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
Cassitymega, regarding this and this, there are issues with you edits. For example, WP:Tone issues. That stated, I'm not going to revert again. Flyer22 Frozen ( talk) 00:24, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
The tone isn't that bad, though. Regarding this? References aren't placed like that. They should be after a sentence or paragraph. Flyer22 Frozen ( talk) 00:27, 13 May 2020 (UTC)
- Hi @Flyer22Frozen I made the edits on the references like you suggested. I also edited the piece for tone and made some adjustments. With respect to the original authors, I believe my edits are a significant improvement upon the original entry. The sources, with the exception of the article on activists, are all academic or from government documents and all have working links. Cassitymega ( talk) 00:52, 13 May 2020 (UTC)