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Everything appears in working order and this is a great hook, but, unfortunately, the article is not new enough—created in 2015—so I'm afraid I have to reject it.
Krisgabwoosh (
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19:32, 13 January 2023 (UTC)reply
@
Prosperosity and
Krisgabwoosh: The hook checks out, but it's a mouthful and you've possibly overexplained, so there's less of a reason to click. Can we try something shorter, like...
@
Cielquiparle: I feel like this oversimplifies the hook to the point that it becomes generic. Any album can be nominated for an award, what makes this particularly interesting? Mentioning that the awards are from different countries (something like "... for both a Canadian Juno and New Zealand Aotearoa" award) could work but, eh, I still like the original.
Krisgabwoosh (
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16:02, 17 January 2023 (UTC)reply
Thanks, @
Krisgabwoosh:ALT0b is definitely an improvement over ALT0 and ALT0a, IMO. (I've struck ALT0a.) It also overcomes another issue with ALT0, which is that the article doesn't explicitly say that the reason she was nominated for both awards was because of her dual citizenship. (Yes, it's awfully picky I know – I get that it's "implied" – but it also requires some outside knowledge that isn't in the article, whereas in an article like
Super Ballon d'Or, the winner's eligibility due to dual citizenship is very explicit.) Listening to the album now (it is great!!) and another thought I had was – is there any way to work in the word "
rockabilly" into a hook...?
Cielquiparle (
talk)
21:25, 17 January 2023 (UTC)reply
I'm happy for the changes but I'd strongly recommend against "New Zealand Aotearoa" - Aotearoa is the name of the country (and we only ever see the name listed in dual languages as "Aotearoa / New Zealand", so it looks very peculiar). --
Prosperosity (
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02:31, 18 January 2023 (UTC)reply
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Recorded – "The Lab, Auckland" → "The Lab (Auckland)", and this should be at the studio parameter instead, as the recorded parameter should include the dates of recording for this album per
template. Done by reviewer
Genre – Replace hlist with bullet points per
template, and uncapitalise rockabilly Done by reviewer
Label – Replace hlist with bullet points per
template, "Neilson Records" → "Neilson (
independent)", and wikilink
Outside Music Done by reviewer
Producer – Replace commas with bullet points per
template Done by reviewer
"released in February 2020." → "released on 14 February 2020, by Neilson Records and Outside Music." – you gotta mention the labels and the actual release date Done
I'd suggest mentioning that it debuted at number 8 on the
Official New Zealand Music Chart. Don't source it as it is sourced in the charts section. Done
Production
End image caption sentence with full stop. Done
"the songs are inspired" → "the songs in the album are inspired" Done
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Everything appears in working order and this is a great hook, but, unfortunately, the article is not new enough—created in 2015—so I'm afraid I have to reject it.
Krisgabwoosh (
talk)
19:32, 13 January 2023 (UTC)reply
@
Prosperosity and
Krisgabwoosh: The hook checks out, but it's a mouthful and you've possibly overexplained, so there's less of a reason to click. Can we try something shorter, like...
@
Cielquiparle: I feel like this oversimplifies the hook to the point that it becomes generic. Any album can be nominated for an award, what makes this particularly interesting? Mentioning that the awards are from different countries (something like "... for both a Canadian Juno and New Zealand Aotearoa" award) could work but, eh, I still like the original.
Krisgabwoosh (
talk)
16:02, 17 January 2023 (UTC)reply
Thanks, @
Krisgabwoosh:ALT0b is definitely an improvement over ALT0 and ALT0a, IMO. (I've struck ALT0a.) It also overcomes another issue with ALT0, which is that the article doesn't explicitly say that the reason she was nominated for both awards was because of her dual citizenship. (Yes, it's awfully picky I know – I get that it's "implied" – but it also requires some outside knowledge that isn't in the article, whereas in an article like
Super Ballon d'Or, the winner's eligibility due to dual citizenship is very explicit.) Listening to the album now (it is great!!) and another thought I had was – is there any way to work in the word "
rockabilly" into a hook...?
Cielquiparle (
talk)
21:25, 17 January 2023 (UTC)reply
I'm happy for the changes but I'd strongly recommend against "New Zealand Aotearoa" - Aotearoa is the name of the country (and we only ever see the name listed in dual languages as "Aotearoa / New Zealand", so it looks very peculiar). --
Prosperosity (
talk)
02:31, 18 January 2023 (UTC)reply
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Recorded – "The Lab, Auckland" → "The Lab (Auckland)", and this should be at the studio parameter instead, as the recorded parameter should include the dates of recording for this album per
template. Done by reviewer
Genre – Replace hlist with bullet points per
template, and uncapitalise rockabilly Done by reviewer
Label – Replace hlist with bullet points per
template, "Neilson Records" → "Neilson (
independent)", and wikilink
Outside Music Done by reviewer
Producer – Replace commas with bullet points per
template Done by reviewer
"released in February 2020." → "released on 14 February 2020, by Neilson Records and Outside Music." – you gotta mention the labels and the actual release date Done
I'd suggest mentioning that it debuted at number 8 on the
Official New Zealand Music Chart. Don't source it as it is sourced in the charts section. Done
Production
End image caption sentence with full stop. Done
"the songs are inspired" → "the songs in the album are inspired" Done
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.