Fix the dead links first and follow a single reference style. Some of the references have dates like 2015-01-21. Please follow a style like 25 July 2013. (Looks better). —
Ssven2speak 2 me03:56, 26 January 2015 (UTC)reply
For those with authors, write the references in this format - Rachel Saltz (8 August 2013). "Taking the Fast Train to Win a Mob Princess". The New York Times. Retrieved 9 August 2013.
For those without authors - "Review: Chennai Express is a rollicking trip to nowhere!". Rediff.com. 9 August 2013. Retrieved 26 August 2013.
For those without publication dates - "Chennai Express (2013) International Box Office Results – Box Office Mojo". Box Office Mojo. Retrieved 11 September 2013. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:14, 26 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Newspapers should be in italics. Reference no #6 and #66, use of
Twitter for GA is inappropriate (even though it is by Taran Adarsh and Vishal Dadlani respectively). Find another source. —
Ssven2speak 2 me03:58, 26 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"About 68 minutes of footage were augmented with CGI by Reliance MediaWorks" — What does "augumented" mean? Can you replace it with a more understandable word? —
Ssven2speak 2 me04:43, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
But still, is there a source which explains that she is not in the cast? If yes, add it. If not, just remove the entire part regarding Manorama (as it was just a speculation/rumour then). —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:26, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"In January 2013, a shoot was supposed scheduled to take place in Ooty, but since Khan felt that Ooty was too far from Mumbai, several locations from Ooty were reconstructed on the outskirts of Panchgani in Wai by art director Narendra Ruharikar. " — Source? —
Ssven2speak 2 me04:55, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The score of Chennai Express was composed by Amar Mohile; the songs were composed by the duo Vishal-Shekhar, and the lyrics were written by Amitabh Bhattacharya and Yo Yo Honey Singh." — Source? —
Ssven2speak 2 me17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"Recording of the songs began in late October 2012. The track "Ready Steady Po" was recorded in November 2012 by the music's composers. Several sources said that the director and actor were unsatisfied with the score. The director was reportedly asked to plan for a different musical composition." — is this explained in reference no. #45? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The song "1 2 3 4 get on the dance floor" was released as a promotional single on World Music Day. On 27 June 2013, the video promo of the song "Titli" was released, and on 11 July 2013, the promo video of "Kashmir Main Tu Kanyakumari" was released. On 19 July 2013, T-Series uploaded a song to its official channel on YouTube; sung by Honey Singh." — is this explained in reference no. #45? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Comment: I don't see any actual need for referencing that line. I don't find any source for that, but at most I can link the official video links with the lines.
EthicallyYours!12:15, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Trim some of the quotes and explain the critics's opinion of the Soundtrack album. Can you do this for IBNLive and Rediff.com? For Rediff.com, it sounds as if it is focusing only on SPB's song. It is best if you rewrite Rediff.com's statement. —
Ssven2speak 2 me06:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"Chennai Express was scheduled to be released in non-traditional international markets. In Peru, it was the first Hindi film to be released on the same day as in India." — Source? —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"A platform running game titled Chennai Express: Escape from Rameshwaram, based on the film and featuring Shahrukh Khan & Deepika Padukone, was developed by Disney UTV's digital wing, and launched on 24 July 2013 for Android systems." — is this explained in reference no. #53? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The agreement was linked to the film's box office revenue—the first deal of its kind in Indian cinema." — is this explained in reference no. #58? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The film had its television premiere on 20 October 2013, and was seen by a record number of viewers, almost doubling that of the highest rated fiction show. — is this explained in reference no. #59? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"Along with Once Upon ay Time in Mumbai Dobaara!, Chennai Express was initially abandoned by Pakistani distributors and exhibitors because four of their[who?] films were released on the same day." — Rectify the "who?" sign and source the sentence. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
For example, the line "The film collected ₹292.50 million (US$3.5 million) on its opening day" Can be written as "The film collected ₹ 292.5 million on its opening day". I have done it for you. Do the same for all the INRConvert templates. —
Ssven2speak 2 me15:32, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply
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Ssven2: I don't see any apparent need to change them. It's the US $ values that may change (and that's better); the INR value remains constant, as provided from the markup.
EthicallyYours!16:07, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Fix the dead links first and follow a single reference style. Some of the references have dates like 2015-01-21. Please follow a style like 25 July 2013. (Looks better). —
Ssven2speak 2 me03:56, 26 January 2015 (UTC)reply
For those with authors, write the references in this format - Rachel Saltz (8 August 2013). "Taking the Fast Train to Win a Mob Princess". The New York Times. Retrieved 9 August 2013.
For those without authors - "Review: Chennai Express is a rollicking trip to nowhere!". Rediff.com. 9 August 2013. Retrieved 26 August 2013.
For those without publication dates - "Chennai Express (2013) International Box Office Results – Box Office Mojo". Box Office Mojo. Retrieved 11 September 2013. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:14, 26 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Newspapers should be in italics. Reference no #6 and #66, use of
Twitter for GA is inappropriate (even though it is by Taran Adarsh and Vishal Dadlani respectively). Find another source. —
Ssven2speak 2 me03:58, 26 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"About 68 minutes of footage were augmented with CGI by Reliance MediaWorks" — What does "augumented" mean? Can you replace it with a more understandable word? —
Ssven2speak 2 me04:43, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
But still, is there a source which explains that she is not in the cast? If yes, add it. If not, just remove the entire part regarding Manorama (as it was just a speculation/rumour then). —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:26, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"In January 2013, a shoot was supposed scheduled to take place in Ooty, but since Khan felt that Ooty was too far from Mumbai, several locations from Ooty were reconstructed on the outskirts of Panchgani in Wai by art director Narendra Ruharikar. " — Source? —
Ssven2speak 2 me04:55, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The score of Chennai Express was composed by Amar Mohile; the songs were composed by the duo Vishal-Shekhar, and the lyrics were written by Amitabh Bhattacharya and Yo Yo Honey Singh." — Source? —
Ssven2speak 2 me17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"Recording of the songs began in late October 2012. The track "Ready Steady Po" was recorded in November 2012 by the music's composers. Several sources said that the director and actor were unsatisfied with the score. The director was reportedly asked to plan for a different musical composition." — is this explained in reference no. #45? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The song "1 2 3 4 get on the dance floor" was released as a promotional single on World Music Day. On 27 June 2013, the video promo of the song "Titli" was released, and on 11 July 2013, the promo video of "Kashmir Main Tu Kanyakumari" was released. On 19 July 2013, T-Series uploaded a song to its official channel on YouTube; sung by Honey Singh." — is this explained in reference no. #45? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me17:09, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Comment: I don't see any actual need for referencing that line. I don't find any source for that, but at most I can link the official video links with the lines.
EthicallyYours!12:15, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Trim some of the quotes and explain the critics's opinion of the Soundtrack album. Can you do this for IBNLive and Rediff.com? For Rediff.com, it sounds as if it is focusing only on SPB's song. It is best if you rewrite Rediff.com's statement. —
Ssven2speak 2 me06:26, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"Chennai Express was scheduled to be released in non-traditional international markets. In Peru, it was the first Hindi film to be released on the same day as in India." — Source? —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"A platform running game titled Chennai Express: Escape from Rameshwaram, based on the film and featuring Shahrukh Khan & Deepika Padukone, was developed by Disney UTV's digital wing, and launched on 24 July 2013 for Android systems." — is this explained in reference no. #53? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The agreement was linked to the film's box office revenue—the first deal of its kind in Indian cinema." — is this explained in reference no. #58? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"The film had its television premiere on 20 October 2013, and was seen by a record number of viewers, almost doubling that of the highest rated fiction show. — is this explained in reference no. #59? If yes, then leave it as it is. If not, find a source for it. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"Along with Once Upon ay Time in Mumbai Dobaara!, Chennai Express was initially abandoned by Pakistani distributors and exhibitors because four of their[who?] films were released on the same day." — Rectify the "who?" sign and source the sentence. —
Ssven2speak 2 me09:56, 29 January 2015 (UTC)reply
For example, the line "The film collected ₹292.50 million (US$3.5 million) on its opening day" Can be written as "The film collected ₹ 292.5 million on its opening day". I have done it for you. Do the same for all the INRConvert templates. —
Ssven2speak 2 me15:32, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply
@
Ssven2: I don't see any apparent need to change them. It's the US $ values that may change (and that's better); the INR value remains constant, as provided from the markup.
EthicallyYours!16:07, 30 January 2015 (UTC)reply