There is no mention of Tabloid on the article. Checked twice. Nothing found on search of "Tabloid" in Chrome, and when I clicked "fix link" on the disambig tool it says there is no disambig links. Data is not updated I guess. Clearing the cache may also prove to be helpful? Ethically(
Yours)06:31, 22 December 2013 (UTC)reply
The tool shows "The toolserver database revision is out dated." In the footer, a small note is placed saying it was last updated during September 2013.
I used the disambig tool as well, and it didn't yield anything for the article. I also checked
Tabloid's What Links Here since it was mentioned on this page as the troublesome link, and I couldn't find anything related to this article or templates within it. -
Purplewowies (
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16:45, 30 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Reading the film script to some actor, so that he/she can reflect his or her views on the film and whether he/she wants to act in the film. It is pretty clear and is easy to understand. I don't think that it requires any change whatsoever. Ethically(
Yours)`
I have never heard of this term. Is it a Bollywood term? In the U.S., my perception is that actors receive scripts (mail, email or download) and read them like one would read a play. This sounds like an actor invites a person into their home and that person reads the scrip to them. It sounds odd. It sounds like to receive the script one must host a human being who reads it to you.--
TonyTheTiger (
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14:17, 23 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Oh yes Tony :) It is a Bollywood term, more commonly used in India and South Asian countries than in the US. Most films get kicked off in this manner. The director narrates the script in brief, the actor decides whether to accept or reject. That's the old business here, old man! Cheers. Ethically(
Yours)16:27, 23 December 2013 (UTC)reply
I have fixed minor grammatical mistakes. If anything was left that failed to catch my attention, I'd change it. And, since this article is related to India, where British English is used, and not American, it'd be in compliance with policies to use "non-American" English. Ethically(
Yours)12:14, 24 December 2013 (UTC)reply
The quote "It is likely to appeal music lovers" either needs another to following appeal (if it was omitted accidentally) or a [sic] to denote the actual quote is ungrammatical.--
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I am fairly certain that there is some POV editing going on here. With 3s and 3.5s out of 5 not all the comments should be positive. There should be some problems with the music that the professionals who have given somewhat mediocre reviews have noted. Either expand the given reviews or add some more to give a more robust set of critiques. I.e., we expect a summary of both the positive and negative elements.--
TonyTheTiger (
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17:45, 24 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Although it seems like it is biased, I couldn't find too many negative reviews available. Still, changed the Joginder Singh (Rediff) review to a point where is sort-of-criticised. Ethically(
Yours)14:45, 25 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Question: Does PD here mean Public Domain? I'm confused. The image was taken by someone and licensed with a CC copyright. Could you possibly make it more clear, so that I can work on it? Ethically(
Yours)07:11, 26 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Atleast you could have given me the time to check back your comments. It feels bad after such a lot of hard work, you see. Anyways, I have contacted Jionpedia about the issue and requested PC protection. When can I renominate it again? Ethically(
Yours)15:22, 1 January 2014 (UTC)reply
First of all, thank you for the Merry Christmas message! Loved it. Coming back to topic, I'm not sure if more than one reviewer is allowed to- maybe Tony knows about this- to review one article. Still, your opinions and suggestions will be greatly valued; so feel free to drop by comments. Regards, Ethically(
Yours)03:51, 24 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Citation needed: "The filming began at Mehboob Studio in Mumbai on 5 October 2012." Also Reference #32 doesn't states that "cast and crew went to Goa in November for filming".--
Joseph12:36, 27 December 2013 (UTC)reply
There is no mention of Tabloid on the article. Checked twice. Nothing found on search of "Tabloid" in Chrome, and when I clicked "fix link" on the disambig tool it says there is no disambig links. Data is not updated I guess. Clearing the cache may also prove to be helpful? Ethically(
Yours)06:31, 22 December 2013 (UTC)reply
The tool shows "The toolserver database revision is out dated." In the footer, a small note is placed saying it was last updated during September 2013.
I used the disambig tool as well, and it didn't yield anything for the article. I also checked
Tabloid's What Links Here since it was mentioned on this page as the troublesome link, and I couldn't find anything related to this article or templates within it. -
Purplewowies (
talk)
16:45, 30 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Reading the film script to some actor, so that he/she can reflect his or her views on the film and whether he/she wants to act in the film. It is pretty clear and is easy to understand. I don't think that it requires any change whatsoever. Ethically(
Yours)`
I have never heard of this term. Is it a Bollywood term? In the U.S., my perception is that actors receive scripts (mail, email or download) and read them like one would read a play. This sounds like an actor invites a person into their home and that person reads the scrip to them. It sounds odd. It sounds like to receive the script one must host a human being who reads it to you.--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:CHICAGO /
WP:WAWARD)
14:17, 23 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Oh yes Tony :) It is a Bollywood term, more commonly used in India and South Asian countries than in the US. Most films get kicked off in this manner. The director narrates the script in brief, the actor decides whether to accept or reject. That's the old business here, old man! Cheers. Ethically(
Yours)16:27, 23 December 2013 (UTC)reply
I have fixed minor grammatical mistakes. If anything was left that failed to catch my attention, I'd change it. And, since this article is related to India, where British English is used, and not American, it'd be in compliance with policies to use "non-American" English. Ethically(
Yours)12:14, 24 December 2013 (UTC)reply
The quote "It is likely to appeal music lovers" either needs another to following appeal (if it was omitted accidentally) or a [sic] to denote the actual quote is ungrammatical.--
TonyTheTiger (
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I am fairly certain that there is some POV editing going on here. With 3s and 3.5s out of 5 not all the comments should be positive. There should be some problems with the music that the professionals who have given somewhat mediocre reviews have noted. Either expand the given reviews or add some more to give a more robust set of critiques. I.e., we expect a summary of both the positive and negative elements.--
TonyTheTiger (
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C /
WP:FOUR /
WP:CHICAGO /
WP:WAWARD)
17:45, 24 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Although it seems like it is biased, I couldn't find too many negative reviews available. Still, changed the Joginder Singh (Rediff) review to a point where is sort-of-criticised. Ethically(
Yours)14:45, 25 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Question: Does PD here mean Public Domain? I'm confused. The image was taken by someone and licensed with a CC copyright. Could you possibly make it more clear, so that I can work on it? Ethically(
Yours)07:11, 26 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Atleast you could have given me the time to check back your comments. It feels bad after such a lot of hard work, you see. Anyways, I have contacted Jionpedia about the issue and requested PC protection. When can I renominate it again? Ethically(
Yours)15:22, 1 January 2014 (UTC)reply
First of all, thank you for the Merry Christmas message! Loved it. Coming back to topic, I'm not sure if more than one reviewer is allowed to- maybe Tony knows about this- to review one article. Still, your opinions and suggestions will be greatly valued; so feel free to drop by comments. Regards, Ethically(
Yours)03:51, 24 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Citation needed: "The filming began at Mehboob Studio in Mumbai on 5 October 2012." Also Reference #32 doesn't states that "cast and crew went to Goa in November for filming".--
Joseph12:36, 27 December 2013 (UTC)reply