Charlestowne Mall has been listed as one of the
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Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 22:14, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Page seems pretty straightforward, hopefully, this will be relatively quick. These are my initial notes, I'll probably add more edits as they come up.-Just a quick skim of the page.
Earwig isn't picking up anything. The article looks good on this front.
A large amount of the article is written in the purview of something being planned or announced, I think it's technically considered future participle tense. This needs to be changed or at least expanded to establish if something actually took place. I.e. "Construction was expected", "was to be given", etc. This is describing events in the past but leaves it to interpretation if the event actually occurred. Try to keep the article in the realm of more concrete events/more direct. It's okay if the outcome is unknown, but make that clear that something isn't known.
@ Etriusus: Think I've addressed most of your concerns. Ten Pound Hammer • ( What did I screw up now?) 00:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
Charlestowne Mall has been listed as one of the
Art and architecture good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: May 14, 2022. ( Reviewed version). |
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NBA2030 (
talk ·
contribs) on 25 July 2017 with the comment: Not an extremely notable mall and there is not a lot of info on the history. Has a some uncited info as well and is poorly written. It was contested by TenPoundHammer ( talk · contribs) on 1 August 2017 with the comment: deprod, article is well sourced |
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Reviewer: Etriusus ( talk · contribs) 22:14, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
Page seems pretty straightforward, hopefully, this will be relatively quick. These are my initial notes, I'll probably add more edits as they come up.-Just a quick skim of the page.
Earwig isn't picking up anything. The article looks good on this front.
A large amount of the article is written in the purview of something being planned or announced, I think it's technically considered future participle tense. This needs to be changed or at least expanded to establish if something actually took place. I.e. "Construction was expected", "was to be given", etc. This is describing events in the past but leaves it to interpretation if the event actually occurred. Try to keep the article in the realm of more concrete events/more direct. It's okay if the outcome is unknown, but make that clear that something isn't known.
@ Etriusus: Think I've addressed most of your concerns. Ten Pound Hammer • ( What did I screw up now?) 00:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)