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Nominator: Roc0ast3r ( talk · contribs) 02:39, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 22:12, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this.
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The coat of arms images are appropriately tagged. Sources are reliable. Spotchecks (footnote numbers refer to this version):
Spotcheck passes. I'll read through the content next and post any comments below. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 22:32, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Earwig finds no issues. I just have one suggestion from a read-through:
The above is a minor point and I'm not going to hold up GA over it; up to you if you want to make that change. I'll go ahead and pass this now. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 10:47, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
In the Peerage of the United Kingdom, the Marquess of Ely is concurrently Baron Loftus, entitling the Marquess to a seat in the House of Lords. As a result, Tottenham sat in the House as Baron Loftus ..., but I agree that the sentence might not be the most clear. I went ahead and changed that sentence. RONIN TALK 15:40, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
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Nominator: Roc0ast3r ( talk · contribs) 02:39, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Mike Christie ( talk · contribs) 22:12, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this.
Mike Christie (
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22:12, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
The coat of arms images are appropriately tagged. Sources are reliable. Spotchecks (footnote numbers refer to this version):
Spotcheck passes. I'll read through the content next and post any comments below. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 22:32, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Earwig finds no issues. I just have one suggestion from a read-through:
The above is a minor point and I'm not going to hold up GA over it; up to you if you want to make that change. I'll go ahead and pass this now. Mike Christie ( talk - contribs - library) 10:47, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
In the Peerage of the United Kingdom, the Marquess of Ely is concurrently Baron Loftus, entitling the Marquess to a seat in the House of Lords. As a result, Tottenham sat in the House as Baron Loftus ..., but I agree that the sentence might not be the most clear. I went ahead and changed that sentence. RONIN TALK 15:40, 9 July 2024 (UTC)