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Reviewer: The Rambling Man ( talk · contribs) 09:46, 31 August 2021 (UTC) reply

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• "produce lumber. Mears" link lumber first time.
•  Done

• " to ship his" transport.
•  Done

• "18 miles" convert.
•  Done

• "canals, canal locks, control" -> "canals, their locks, control"
•  Done

• "the Farmer's Map of Michigan, and" is this a notable map?
•  Done = expanded on this.

• "lumber camp. The camp " shade repetitive.
•  Done

• "1861 depiction of.." avoid starting with a numeral.
•  Done

• "near Ludington) renamed" overlinked.
•  Done

• ISBNs ought to be formatted consistently.
•  Done

This is in good condition, not too much to address. The Rambling Man ( Keep wearing the mask...) 10:07, 31 August 2021 (UTC) reply

Thanks for review. Will start working on this after breakfast.-- Doug Coldwell ( talk) 10:48, 31 August 2021 (UTC) reply

@ The Rambling Man: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.-- Doug Coldwell ( talk) 15:37, 31 August 2021 (UTC) reply