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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld ( talk · contribs) 18:10, 9 June 2014 (UTC)
You can claim a fair use photograph which would improve quality. Try [1] but scale it down to around 300px before uploading.
Merge Business career and change it to "Academic and business career".
Did he publish anything or what? There seems to be next to coverage of what he actually did and why he is notable in his field other than all his positions and honors. I'd like to see a new paragraph or two saying things like, In 1960, William published xxx, an analysis of the financial system in Colombia" etc and so on.Obviously you don't have to mention all but something covering a dozen or so of his most notable and what he contributed to his field would be most useful. Otherwise it's difficult to consider it to have all of the "major aspects".♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:33, 9 June 2014 (UTC)
Dr. Blofeld, thank you for your careful review of this article! I've finished making the smaller changes, but will take a little longer to research and include Williams' more notable works. I'll also work with the Wikipedia graphists to edit the image of Williams. I'll try and complete this as quickly as possible! Thanks again for all your continued guidance! -- Caponer ( talk) 19:59, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
No worries, ping me when you've done. I'll put on hold.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:30, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
Sorry to hear that, any reason why? Obviously you don't have to document them all but if you could look at his works and try to write a paragraph or two on what he typically wrote about that would be good.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
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I'm not going to keep this open very longer but I do hope eventually you'll find more on his work to write about. I'm really disappointed that we've lost you Caponer. I wish you all the best.♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:54, 10 July 2014 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld ( talk · contribs) 18:10, 9 June 2014 (UTC)
You can claim a fair use photograph which would improve quality. Try [1] but scale it down to around 300px before uploading.
Merge Business career and change it to "Academic and business career".
Did he publish anything or what? There seems to be next to coverage of what he actually did and why he is notable in his field other than all his positions and honors. I'd like to see a new paragraph or two saying things like, In 1960, William published xxx, an analysis of the financial system in Colombia" etc and so on.Obviously you don't have to mention all but something covering a dozen or so of his most notable and what he contributed to his field would be most useful. Otherwise it's difficult to consider it to have all of the "major aspects".♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:33, 9 June 2014 (UTC)
Dr. Blofeld, thank you for your careful review of this article! I've finished making the smaller changes, but will take a little longer to research and include Williams' more notable works. I'll also work with the Wikipedia graphists to edit the image of Williams. I'll try and complete this as quickly as possible! Thanks again for all your continued guidance! -- Caponer ( talk) 19:59, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
No worries, ping me when you've done. I'll put on hold.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:30, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
Sorry to hear that, any reason why? Obviously you don't have to document them all but if you could look at his works and try to write a paragraph or two on what he typically wrote about that would be good.♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
I'm not going to keep this open very longer but I do hope eventually you'll find more on his work to write about. I'm really disappointed that we've lost you Caponer. I wish you all the best.♦ Dr. Blofeld 10:54, 10 July 2014 (UTC)