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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack ( talk · contribs) 16:27, 11 January 2020 (UTC) reply

Reading now … -- Jens Lallensack ( talk) 16:27, 11 January 2020 (UTC) reply

• The kingdom was founded when Emperor Gaozu granted the territory to Wu Rui, one of his main followers, around the same time as the establishment of the Han dynasty. – I would add here the date (e.g., "around 203/202 BC") as this is a central information for the lead.

 Done.

• most notably Mawangdui, the tomb of Changsha's chancellor Li Cang and his family – this information of the lead is not repeated in the body of the article. I suggest to add a sentence introducing this important site to the main text.

 Done. It may be a little difficult go too much into the details about the site since information from Mawangdui covers all the aspects. I've added a sentence at the culture section as Mawangdui is mentioned multiple times there.

• His army then followed the Han leader Liu Bang – it is unclear to whom "His" is referring to. Xiang Yu or Wu Rui?

 Done, changed it to "Rui".

• In 178 BC, the kingdom passed to his son Wu Zhu – to whom is "his" referring to? Zhao Tuo?

 Done, changed it to "Wu You".

• Wu Zhu reigned for 21 years, dying in 157 BC without male issue. – this sentence needs a citation

 Done.

• Western Han dynasty – does that mean that the empire was splitted in a western and eastern half? I suggest to add brief background information in the appropriate place in the "History" section, as this would help readers not familiar with the history of the Han dynasty.

 Done, briefly explained the situation in the late Western Han – Eastern Han period.

• provide us important evidence about the concept of meridian channels in its infancy – I suggest to remove the "us", to follow Wikipedia writing style.

 Done.

• @ Esiymbro: This is a fine article, I only have some minor quibbles. -- Jens Lallensack ( talk) 21:33, 14 January 2020 (UTC) reply

@ Jens Lallensack:. Thank you for the review.:) I've worked on all the problems here. Esiymbro ( talk) 14:40, 16 January 2020 (UTC) reply

@ Esiymbro: Thanks for the fixes. Looks good. Promoting now. -- Jens Lallensack ( talk) 21:57, 17 January 2020 (UTC) reply