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CallMeNathan •
Talk2Me
06:51, 15 April 2011 (UTC)
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Lead
- singer-songwriter -> link
- The first 3-4 sentences read a little stop and go and choppy. Try and merge them a bit so they flow better
- It received mixed reviews -> from music critics
- achieved positive commercial outcomes - re-write. Also, the song didn't exactly perform well
- Swift performing with a band -> anything else?
Background
- Pretty nice. Not going to attack you on this one :D
Composition
- Swift's vocals, Swift's vocals
Reception
- generally positive to mixed -> we have 1 negative review and 1 mixed. Its safe to say mixed period
- peak at number ten -> peak position of number 10
- making Swift's -> it
Music video
- That long sentence is a bit run-on. Try cutting it down or separating it
- As the video progresses, Swift is seeing singing and dancing -> try and incorporating this into another sentence
Live performances
- Swift has performed the track on the AOL Sessions, -> none of these small sentences. Also, it needs a period
- Since, Swift
- sang suspended from the crowd on an elevator -> re-write
- She then came down, where she was joined by a teenage choir. Swift finished the performance by surfing the crowd -> again, connect
- She noted, "It's been a tough year." And -> comma, not period