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Hi Andrew this is Robert T. from class. Your article looks like it's off to a great start. The style the article is written in is very good. Your references also look good/reliable. I would suggest adding a few more pictures. The picture of the tomb is helpful, but I found myself wondering what exactly the shield looked like while reading the description. Also some links to other Wikipedia pages would be great. I would also suggest finding a few more sources so that your article has a little more variety/reliability. Lastly, it might be interesting to elaborate more on where the shield was found and the context of those tombs and the time period. Maybe add a paragraph/section on what is going on in history at that time. Otherwise, your article is looking great!
Hi Andrew - this is a great start! I have a couple suggestions for how to make your article even better:
Jpaga ( talk) 15:45, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
Hi Andrew! Your article is looking really good so far. I particularly like how you discuss what different scholars think about the shield. Keep up the good work! Robert Y. Rob6820 ( talk) 22:38, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
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Hi Andrew this is Robert T. from class. Your article looks like it's off to a great start. The style the article is written in is very good. Your references also look good/reliable. I would suggest adding a few more pictures. The picture of the tomb is helpful, but I found myself wondering what exactly the shield looked like while reading the description. Also some links to other Wikipedia pages would be great. I would also suggest finding a few more sources so that your article has a little more variety/reliability. Lastly, it might be interesting to elaborate more on where the shield was found and the context of those tombs and the time period. Maybe add a paragraph/section on what is going on in history at that time. Otherwise, your article is looking great!
Hi Andrew - this is a great start! I have a couple suggestions for how to make your article even better:
Jpaga ( talk) 15:45, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
Hi Andrew! Your article is looking really good so far. I particularly like how you discuss what different scholars think about the shield. Keep up the good work! Robert Y. Rob6820 ( talk) 22:38, 26 November 2017 (UTC)