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Just Received comments on the article. Our wikipedian Yaris678 has provided his positive feedback & suggested to trim the CERC regulations Portion. Moreover he called for converting the Tables into Paragraph format. i tried to justify the same at [ |Wikipedia Feedback]. Pls provide your opinion for improving the article.
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I read through the entire article and found a couple Manual of Style problems. These include spacing after references and periods after references. You never put a space before you put a reference, and you always put a space after the reference. Also, you never put a period after the reference; it goes before the reference so it doesn't look like there's a huge gap between sentence and period. Also, I found several grammar errors. The & signs in the article should be changed to and instead. Another thing is, generally, the "see also" section should go just after the article and before the references, not right at the end after the references. I have a couple things to do first, but once those are done I'll work on some of these issues. Regards, The Raptor Let's talk/ My mistakes; I mean, er, contributions 12:57, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
There is a necessity for separation in the short run, the two regulators should be merged eventually, as there are substantial synergies between them. should read "There is a necessity for separation in the short run; the two regulators should be merged eventually, as there are substantial synergies between them(note the semi-colon instead of a comma). 1998 for rationalization of electricity tariff, should read 1998 for rationalization of electricity tarriffs(plural) or ...of the elecricity tarriff. These are two examples. Punctuation errors such as these can deter from the overall credibility of an article. This is a very noble effort, and the article is well-researched, so the detail work (punctuation, etc) will serve to make it even stronger. Is English your second language? If so, you've done a remarkable job. I would say maybe give a draft of the article to someone for copy editing to find and correct those types of errors. If you like, I can give it a try. :) The only changes I would be making would be punctuation, etc., as I mentioned above. Best, Piano tech 11:59, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
The article is a big improvement on the previous version I saw. Well done! One suggestion - I would put the "Important Regulations / Policy Framework by CERC" nearer the bottom, in a similar way to how you many articles on a writer put a "Publications" section near the bottom. It should be just above the "See also" section. See WP:FOOTERS. Yaris678 ( talk) 12:51, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
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Just Received comments on the article. Our wikipedian Yaris678 has provided his positive feedback & suggested to trim the CERC regulations Portion. Moreover he called for converting the Tables into Paragraph format. i tried to justify the same at [ |Wikipedia Feedback]. Pls provide your opinion for improving the article.
Hello. I am here to review this new article. Find my review below:
I read through the entire article and found a couple Manual of Style problems. These include spacing after references and periods after references. You never put a space before you put a reference, and you always put a space after the reference. Also, you never put a period after the reference; it goes before the reference so it doesn't look like there's a huge gap between sentence and period. Also, I found several grammar errors. The & signs in the article should be changed to and instead. Another thing is, generally, the "see also" section should go just after the article and before the references, not right at the end after the references. I have a couple things to do first, but once those are done I'll work on some of these issues. Regards, The Raptor Let's talk/ My mistakes; I mean, er, contributions 12:57, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
There is a necessity for separation in the short run, the two regulators should be merged eventually, as there are substantial synergies between them. should read "There is a necessity for separation in the short run; the two regulators should be merged eventually, as there are substantial synergies between them(note the semi-colon instead of a comma). 1998 for rationalization of electricity tariff, should read 1998 for rationalization of electricity tarriffs(plural) or ...of the elecricity tarriff. These are two examples. Punctuation errors such as these can deter from the overall credibility of an article. This is a very noble effort, and the article is well-researched, so the detail work (punctuation, etc) will serve to make it even stronger. Is English your second language? If so, you've done a remarkable job. I would say maybe give a draft of the article to someone for copy editing to find and correct those types of errors. If you like, I can give it a try. :) The only changes I would be making would be punctuation, etc., as I mentioned above. Best, Piano tech 11:59, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
The article is a big improvement on the previous version I saw. Well done! One suggestion - I would put the "Important Regulations / Policy Framework by CERC" nearer the bottom, in a similar way to how you many articles on a writer put a "Publications" section near the bottom. It should be just above the "See also" section. See WP:FOOTERS. Yaris678 ( talk) 12:51, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
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